TWE102, 请各位多多指点哦，先谢过了！！

102 Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

When confronted with various questions, different people make different decisions due to their personal experience and preference. One of such intriguing issues is whether schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. As far as I am concerned, I strongly support that evaluation from students will help to upgrade the teaching quality significantly. My view will be substantiated greatly in the following discussion.

To begin with, the first plain reason I am presenting here is that the most revealing criticisms for a teacher are from his students. Teachers spend most of their time with their students in class, teaching knowledge to students and discussing problems with them. So these constructive criticisms from students will help teachers to enhance their strength and improve their weakness. In this way, evaluation from students is necessary.

Next, in the process of evaluation, students can develop a good relationship with their teachers. For instance, students can express their opinions outright, such as which subjects they are most interested in, which teaching method they adapt to quickly. In turn, these evaluations will be an accurate feedback, and from which teachers can know what their students are thinking about and find a better method to communicate with them.

In addition, these evaluations from students provide a truly evidence for schools to judge the working quality of these teachers and pose more pressure on them. Administrations of the school will form a comprehensive impression from the students' evaluations, and therefore will encourage teachers to put more efforts in their work and to update their knowledge on time.

Admittedly, there may be some objections immediately that students sometimes do not have the ability to evaluate their teachers or to understand their behavior. As a proverb says 'Everything has its two sides.' I agree with this opinion to some extent, however, this negative side effect cannot outweigh the foundation for my view as discussed above.

To sum up, due to what have been discussed above, which often interweave into an organic whole and become more persuasive, I may safely reach my conclusion that evaluations from students will benefit the teachers as well as the school significantly.

偶大概帮MM看了一下

结构非常清楚~！而且是标号准的结构。

语言方面没有太大问题，可以看出MM写文章很细心~！

几点建议：

1.模版的问题。偶建议MM准备一个自己的模版，才能记住。现在套模版写的很流利，考试一紧张就忘了。自己的东西怎么也不会忘得。

2.遣词造句的问题。TWE句式不用太复杂（当然MM没有复杂句式，偶是给个提醒），但是要注意句式的变化。关于这点，就需要MM多多看范文，背背也是可以的（这个是偶说的老掉牙的了）

3.结构问题。保持就可以了，这是八股~~~：）

还建议MM看看置顶的汇总，MM加油，高分不是问题~