求问jj AA第三篇写作思路！！

蓝色带鱼 · 发表于 2011-11-7 23:08:52

non-profit 的employee will be more motivated than those who are not, 因为他们认为这是benifit to society。结论是the major automobile manufacturer should donate profits让员工更加有motivation来工作，创造更多利润，
原题：The following appeared in a memorandum from the head of a human resources department at a major automobile manufacturing company to the company 's managers:
“Studies have found that employees of not-for-profit organizations and charities are often more highly motivated than employees of for-profit corporations to perform well at work when their performance is not being monitored or evaluated. Interviews with employees of not-for-profit organizations suggest that the reason for their greater motivation is the belief that their work helps to improve society. Because they believe in the importance of their work, they have personal reasons to perform well, even when no financial reward is present. Thus, if our corporation began donating a significant portion of its profits to humanitarian causes, our employees’ motivation and productivity would increase substantially and our overall profits would increase as well.”

飞行小猪 · 发表于 2011-11-8 00:14:32

以下是我的思路，批判的看哈：

1：Study的精确性：如何调查的，样本是什么
2：错误假设：employees be motivated is because of their work improve society
3：范围问题：for-profit company employees 的motivation比not-for-profit employees的motivation低，不能说明我公司的motivation低。general group的情况扩大到了typical group上。

求问jj AA第三篇写作思路！！

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