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价值1万的中介PS

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发表于 2007-3-19 22:45:00 | 只看该作者

价值1万的中介PS

Postgraduate Admission Office

The University of

 

Personal Statement

 

My name is **. I am at my last year in** University, majored in Accounting. I would like to apply for the MSc at the University of for Sept 2007 entry.

 

Education Background

I did very well in many of subjects at my university, in particular, Financial Accounting, Financial Management, Advanced Mathematics and so on. In the past years study, I have been achieved GPA ** of 4. Besides, I enjoy the feeling of indulging myself in reading relevant books and theories. All in all, I have laid down certain
            fundamentals in my specialty.

 

I realize the importance of practice so I have been very active in taking part in social activities and competitions. Especially as to my major, it requires not only managing theories but also practical skills when dealing with problems. In **, I attended the ** on behalf of my university, which is held by **.

 

With regarding to my English study, I passed the National College English test (**) as well as National College Oral English Test (Band *).

 

Besides, I am very fond of sports. From these sports games and exercises, I not only keep a healthy body but also build up the spirit of confidence and persistence.

 

Study Plan and Career Objective

Business and Finance exist everywhere, from business firms to government organizations, from a small private shop to a transnational company. With the more and more precise division, many across subjects come into being. The four year study in university has laid me strong base, however, I know I should learn more and practice more before I compete with others in the labor market with severe competition. Though Chinese companies are in great need of talent in this field, current employment situation indicate that an undergraduate is in weak position. Therefore, I decide to further my study.

 

The reason I choose the ** as my destination is that its master program is carried out only in one year but with worldwide renowned reputation. And, I want to experience an independent and practical education pattern. As to the University of, I have long heard about it for its beautiful campus and high ratings both in teaching and researching. After careful consideration, I found the MSc is exactly the one I am looking for, as it is a subject specially designed for students who wish to broaden and deepen their understanding about Accounting within the context of a global environment.

 

I would be very grateful if you could consider my application seriously.

 

Thanks for your time and consideration.

一个朋友找的中介,花了一万快,只拿到了上面的垃圾. 目前学校那边还没有消息,

希望能给以后申请的朋友提个醒,珍惜您的人民币,珍重您的前途.

沙发
发表于 2007-3-19 22:55:00 | 只看该作者
哈哈哈,笑死,不过比我得toefl作文写得好。
板凳
发表于 2007-3-19 22:55:00 | 只看该作者
这个太丢人了。比我那个差远了
地板
发表于 2007-3-19 22:58:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用charmant在2007-3-19 22:55:00的发言:
这个太丢人了。比我那个差远了

really?

Can I have a look?

5#
发表于 2007-3-19 23:10:00 | 只看该作者

笑人文笔太肤浅了吧,,内容才最重要,,虽然我也觉得我的中介写的不怎么样,,

美国中介帮不了你多少,,英澳加的可以考虑考虑

6#
发表于 2007-3-19 23:40:00 | 只看该作者
不就模版么。。还不如找写外国修改公司修改也就100多刀。
7#
发表于 2007-3-19 23:42:00 | 只看该作者
这个中介是不是认识美国的学校?和学校有什么合同?所以PS再烂也照样能申?
8#
发表于 2007-3-19 23:55:00 | 只看该作者
PS这东西 当然必须自己写 最多找个老外改语言
9#
发表于 2007-3-20 00:03:00 | 只看该作者

就这水平?找我写把我就收5000,质量保证比这个强得多

10#
发表于 2007-3-20 00:12:00 | 只看该作者

就是我大2时候考6级的作文水平,就这点料还有脸出来招摇撞骗做中介?

服了,这心里素质真是没话讲了!换成是我早羞愤自尽了


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