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lilychou0128 · 发表于 2011-9-4 20:44:26

agree or disagree? If child want to do well in school, parents should limit the hours of watching TV programs or movies。
Should school child be limitted on the hours of watching TV program and movie?
孩子要想在学校里表现好，家长是不是应该限制他们看电视的时间。

With the development of the society, there emerges more and more means for children to spend during their leisure time. The most prevalent choice is to watch television. While many parents would like to control the time their children can watch just because they want children can have good performance in school. This issue has aroused wide public concern. Frankly, I share that children waste too much time in watching tv will lead to a bad end in school work. However, I indeed give my vote to the view that watching can also help children do better in study. Accordingly, a fundamental analysis is discussed as below.

Admittedly, there is amount of junk information in the television, such as violence. According to many researches done recently, violence presented in tv programs or films has had a great influence on children’s behavior. An increasing number of violence events are performed by teenagers. Nonetheless, only narrowing minds on this case is definitely irrational. Such a problem can be overcame through choosing the programs by parents for their children.

First and foremost, some knowledge showed on the tv programs can’t be learned in school. Due to the limitation of resource and equipment, students pick up knowledge in school very abstractly and just with words. The pictures and sound in the television can make up this weakness. Take my little brother for example. He likes watch the problem called wild life at every Friday evening. By watching this show, he knows a lot about animals’ habits and how to stay safety in wild environment. He is always an expert in this field among us. Such information can’t be learned at class. Thus, watching a good program in tv will expends the children’s scope of knowledge.

In addition, through this permission, it can help children to develop an ability to arrange time. It is an important merit of a person to manage his time well both young and old, more essential than doing well in school. Children schedule their free time, either study or watching. If they want to behave well in school, children will stop watching and do assignment because they know it is the time to study. Overtime, children can establish a habit to arrange the time efficiently. Therefore, allowance to manage their free time by themselves furnishes a way to shape a good sense of time.

From the reasons I mentioned above, it comes to my conclusion. It is obvious that watching tv too much has ban effects. It is undoubtedly that watching television can help children to learn more knowledge and the ability to arrange time. So, parents shouldn’t restrict the time to watch television though they want their children do better in school.

独立作文一篇求修改

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