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我快要考试了，今天刚看作文，搜了百度，百度说AI就是议论文，要有自己的观点。我也看了寂静里面的北美范文，
给我最深的感觉就是用词都那么狠，我好多都看不懂 ==，痛苦
说正题，我考过托福，作文是good，但不知道AI是想让咱们怎么写，是说“同意或是不同意”还是“我觉得这东西两说”，
小菜觉得，既然都是议论文，那应该感觉是一样的。
所以求NN告诉我AI到底应该怎么写，望NN说的具体些，通俗些。小菜在这里抱拳了~！！！！O(∩_∩)O
顺便附上一篇作文，是我托福时自己写的，呈上来的意思是想求NN看看，思路和AI到底差多少，还是说差不多，只不过
需要在措辞上像gmat一点。
题目：Government support art museums and music performance or recreational facilities
Should government really need to support art museums and music performance or recreational facilities? People find it hard to come to consensus due to diverse personal experience and conflicting values. Some people agree with the idea while others disagree. I, from my perspective, support the former one, and the reasons are as follows.
First of all, with government support, residents could have some places to relax. It is no doubt to say that everyone needs relax, whoever he or she is. Because, in the contemperary society, with the pressure becomes increasingly common, people needs time, no matter long or short, relax and then refresh themselves. By supportting the recreation, such as art museums and music performance or recreational facilities, one could get rid of the work or study, and he or she can not only appreciate the art object and performance, but also has a rest for the both mental and phsical aspects. It is obvious that government support for the recreation has a positive influence for the society.
Secondly, it is necessary for the government to give residents some appropreate places to communicate with each other. Since people without communication just like fish without water and flower without sunshine. It is communication that exchanges one’s mind with others, modify own thinking, and then improve oneself. With communicating with others, one learns how to read, how to write, and how to do which are all the basic skill for suviving in the contemporary society.Futhermore, in some place, as art museums as a example, people might be told by the finest scholars and meet with the most intelligent people in the nation. For example, through the communication, one can conquer some difficult problem, then he or she savors the joy that communication bring to he or she, and feels that he or she is the happiest person in the world.
Admittedly, there exist many aspects of problem for the government need to face. And the most severe problem is that where does the money come from. The answer, obveriously, is the tax. Government might put too much emphasis on art museums and music performance or the recreational facilities so that it could increases the resident’s pressure of economy. In this way, people seems to need do work harder than before, and they have less time to have a rest. However, all the things have the two sides. Do you really think working is the only one part of the life? Do the society really need miillions of robots work day and night without other things?
Of course, there will be some drawbacks of supportting the museums and music performance or the recreational facilities. But in my opinion, the benefits outweigh the disadvantages, and, I strongly believe that that willbe the good choice for both the government and its residents. And I hope others feel the same way.
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发表于 2011-8-26 17:33:43
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