一题作文狗求助！

ko痞 · 发表于 2010-11-19 23:17:36

The following appeared in a presentation by the chief production manager of a machine parts manufacturing company at a management meeting:
“Our factory in Cookville is our most advanced and efficient. It is capable of producing ten drill bits for each dollar of production costs, whereas none of our other factories can produce more than seven drill bits per dollar of production costs. Therefore, we can reduce our overall drill bit production costs by devoting the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production. Since reducing the production costs of individual machine parts is the only way to achieve our larger goal of reducing our overall production costs, dedicating the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production and shifting all other machine part production to our other factories will help us to attain that larger goal.”
这题看的我很纠结··请问下结论应该是？有什么攻击点呢？谢谢！

goal2011 · 发表于 2010-11-20 00:14:53

个人想法，自己斟酌：
conclusion: dedicating the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production and shifting all other machine part production to our other factories will help us to reduce our overall production cost.

攻击点：1. fail to consider whether there is any other supporting department which is critical to the high efficiency of Cookville factory. For example, supply, HR, whatever, you name it.
2. does not consider whether the overall production costs will increase dramatically by dedicating the Cookille factory entirely to drill bit production. For example, if the drill bits will have to be delivered and assembled in another factory. will the delivery be a big cost?
3. does not give enough information about Crookville factory vs. other factories. for example, what if Crookville only use proficient employees from other factories.

抛砖引玉

ko痞 · 发表于 2010-11-20 00:15:58

个人想法，自己斟酌：
conclusion: dedicating the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production and shifting all other machine part production to our other factories will help us to reduce our overall production cost.

攻击点：1. fail to consider whether there is any other supporting department which is critical to the high efficiency of Cookville factory. For example, supply, HR, whatever, you name it.
2. does not consider whether the overall production costs will increase dramatically by dedicating the Cookille factory entirely to drill bit production. For example, if the drill bits will have to be delivered and assembled in another factory. will the delivery be a big cost?
3. does not give enough information about Crookville factory vs. other factories. for example, what if Crookville only use proficient employees from other factories.

抛砖引玉

-- by 会员 goal2011 (2010/11/20 0:14:53)

多谢哈！

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