CRACK AWA 2次6.0心得

强调下我非牛人。gre作文3分。

转战gmat，发现AWA作文是有套路，不要用文字模版

考了两次，均为6分。

1。一定要把erater的评分标准给吃透了。

重要点:

 1. 减少错率（语法，拼写）。erater对错误的评分计算是（错误数/每句的字节数）

方法：

a。熟记一些长的单词词组。eg:he is a smart men.  he is a brilliant men.

这两句话men都拼写错误了，但是第一句话的错误加权重。因为整个句子的字节数 第二句长。

所以考前背诵点长的单词，词组。套用。

b。写长句。写不出宾语从句，状语从句，独立主格结构。没关系。

考试时候，写完两句话。觉得有关系。就用破折号连接。最简单的把两句变1句，从而减少错误率。

2。重视结构，用连接词，注意段落之间的结构对仗。

全文总分总，每一段再总分总。注意中间三段的内容平衡。不要出现三段字数差很多的现象。不要用套话，空话。

要点就是 尽可能每一句都有个连接词。

我的AW:

开头：the author claims ***. He cites *** as example to support his assertion. In addition, he assumes that...

However, it contains several flaws.

中间三段：

in the 1st place, the author commits a fallacy of ... in presuming that .... However, it is not the case. For example, .... Furthermore, another example is that... . Therefore, without ..., the author cannot ...

in the second place, the author rests on the questionable assumption that.  However, common sense informs me that... For instance, ...Additionally, ... As a result, without ... the author 's claim is problematic.

In the third place, the arguer fails to take into account other factors that ... . For example, ...;

Or, ... Consequently, without ...,  the author can not ...

结尾：

In sum, the author should 把三个分段最后句话分别重复下。

AI :

the issue that ... is complicated and complex. The spearker claims that ... . In my opinion, ....

admitedly, .... . Common sense informs us that ...  As a result, ...  In addition, For example, ... .  Another example is that ...  Consequently, the above examples demonstrate that .

However, ... . There are several reasons: first, .. second, ... third, ...  Therefore, ...

Furthermore, ... .  On one hand, with A .. what happens. .... ; On the other hand, without A, what happens.

Obviously, although the example based on the imagination, it illustrates that ..

In sum, I think that. because 第二第三段首句。

3。内容例子。看到上面的模版，可以看到，我们可以用 假象的例子。

如果这样，怎样；如果不这样，怎样。完成AI的一段。

另外一段可以用一个实际的例子。不建议用 某个，某些。我们可以背点公司名字，行业名字。

和企业相关的话题，就用consulting company : bain mck, bcg 

和环境相关的，某个实际国家。无所谓真实，some country的效果远远低于 russian, china japan.

和教育相关的，各种b school。等等。

例子是为了凑字数。仅此而已。只要围绕着issue的关键词来说，肯定没问题。

再一个例子可以用数据统计调查。bain consulting company conducted a detailed research on ... it shows that ..

In addition, it indicates that. Therefore, it supports the claim ... 一段就搞定了。

我写文章之前大概练习了6篇AA,3篇AI

个人觉得AA需要练习下，把套路固定下来。

AI只要有了结构，其他都随便吹，用最简单的观点，最利于你表达，让你少犯错误的观点文字。不要过分依赖于黄金80等

他的例子，语句太复杂了。我掌握不了。

最后祝大家都能5+。