[求助]个人作文第三篇，22号考，小弟求各路高手猛拍，提提意见也欢迎~~~谢谢大家~~

Do you agree or
disagree with the following statement? It’s more important to spend more time
working than being with family.

Controversies over
whether to spend more time working or being with family seem to be eternal.
Down through the ages, we heard philosophers mentioning us repeatedly that
family is where our life start and end in, thus we belong to our families. On
the other hand, medias nowadays vigorously propagate the experiences of
successful people, which make us eager for a better career. Personally, I would
rather lay more emphasis on spending my time working which means I support the
statement.

On the one hand, it’s a
common sense that without the money earned from work, time spent with family
would be boring either. Hypothetically, an extreme example will be that I don’t
have a job and hang out with family all day round. Then it’ll be ridiculous to
play poker or even just sit and chat with my family constantly while
simultaneously watching my neighbors enjoying a new DVD they’ve just rented. In
contrary, spending more time working means a better salary and being more
capable for creating diversities of entertainment for my family. Therefore, I’m
inclined to claim that spending time working is more meaningful in that it enriches
the family life to some extent.

On the other hand, a
popular perspective alleges that people are now suffering great pressures at
work, so why not just enjoy the leisure at your cozy house with your family?
However, the truth is ironically opposite that pressures actually come from
exactly from my family but not work. Every day in my life, I have to pay for countless
bills consumed by my family, to worry about my parents’ health conditions, to
make relationship with my wife harmonious and also to worry about how to
further my child’s education. Apparently, these anxieties would be enlarged
were I not working. At least when I’m working, the family finance runs
adequately. So why not spend more time working thus helping lighten the
pressures of family?

Furthermore, spending more
time working keeps me competitive to challenges. In contrast, warmth and cares
in family make me less sensitive to changes and chances in career. Nowadays,
everybody including members in family has to endeavor a lot so as to keep up
with the high rate life hence acceptable to spend less time with family. It’s
not rare to see a certain prosperous families gradually degenerate since
members of them get immersed at enjoying their family life rather than keeping
competitive at work. These phenomena deserve contemplate.

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