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If I could change one important thing about your hometown, I wood change the education. My hometown is a small town in the middle of China. The most serious problem in the town is the situation of education. It lacks the neat classroom, the variety book and the experience teacher. It is known to all that “knowledge change the fate”. So education could be an efficient way to alter the children’s life. As I think that change the education change the destiny, I will choose to change the education in my home town.

First of all, the facilities of the school are significant for children to have a good situation to study. I always image a scene that the children are reading books in the light classroom which is located in a beautiful and safety teaching building and I can see students kicking football on the playground which is planted of green grass. Build teaching buildings self-contained and playground in good condition is an essential aspect to change the situation of the education.

Secondly, books are as important as the facilities for education. Children not only learn from teachers, but also learn from books. After lessons, students reading all kings of extracurricular books to cultivated the love of history, art or science. As a well-known saying:” a good book is a good teacher”. The students can develop their interest by reading books. As a result, the library with plentiful books may benefit the education.

In addition, teacher is another fairly vital factor for education. Just like we need a guide when we go to a strange place, we need teachers when we begin studying. They can tell the students where to begin, what students should do and which reference students should choose. When students encounter difficulties they can ask teachers for help and their advices will always be useful. Besides, students can both learn from teachers and discuss problems with teachers. With teachers’ aid, students probably learn easier, faster and more entertainingly. A good teacher is a person who is experienced, patient and passional.

In a word, the facility, the book and the teacher contribute to improve the education. I believe that change the education will alter people’s fate in my home town. Knowledge is the power and education is the origin of knowledge.

If I could change one important thing about my  hometown, I would change the education.

It lacks the neat classrooms, various books and teachers who have abundant experiences in teaching.这个我改得不好，不过你那么用有明显的语法错误。

而且你还可以用一些比较高级的词汇 例如 therefore, thereby.

 I always image a scene that children are reading books in the light classroom which is located in a beautiful and safe teaching building and I can see students kicking football on the playground which is planted of green grass.

After lessons, students may read all kinds of extracurricular books. while reading, they may gain a good path to get familiar with science, art or history. Consequently, they may fall in love with them and learn deeper……

我改的不太好，希望对你又帮助。