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The quotation asserts that, it is only the hard work rather than luck that contributes to success. I agree that working hard is the most important factor which can result in success. However, sometimes, luck is another critical factor and meanwhile, there are some other possible reasons which could be responsible for success to some extent.
“Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.” which was said by the most famous inventor Tomas Edison, could show the importance of industrious work. Edison spent nearly all his time in the laboratory and kept on researching various materials and electronic models, so he could achieve the outstanding attainment. A well-known example is how he invented the lamp. Before his success, he had failed for about one thousand times, but he never gave up, just tried again and again. So why Edison is so excellent, I think it was just his perspiration, that’s to say, his hard working, led to his success. Another example I can prove the importance of hard working is concerned with Yao Ming, a Chinese basket ball player, who is now plying for Houston Rockets in America. He keeps on training his muscle and skill every day. Even when traveling by plane, he is always absorbed in the match videos from which he can study others’ advantages and find his own faults. His drillmaster said that Yao always sit in the first row when talking about the match strategy. In short, without extraordinarily hard work, Yao could not be so successful. However, sometimes luck may play a rather important role in heading for success. With the same effort, two people may achieve quite different accomplishment, which often results from different lucks or opportunities of them. Everyone should know Helen Keller, a famous blind writer. Indeed she was very industrious. But if she had not met the excellent teacher Anne Sullivan, could she be so successful? Not every blind and deaf person has the opportunity to receive so good education, that’s why luck is also important. Besides, gift is sometimes indispensable. Some famous scientists and artists like Einstein, Newton, Beethoven, all showed great gifts when very young. To sum, I agree that hard work is the most vital point which leads to great achievement, taking into accounting examples of figures like Edison and Yao Ming. Nevertheless, we could not neglect some other necessary factors just like luck, gift, though less significant comparatively.
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