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since the strong press of competing and strict standard of diversity abilities in job market,it raises the issue that if it

is dispensibale for  children to learn a foreign language as soon as possible.People's opinion are divergent on such a

controversial issue.The overwhelming majority would support that children benefit from a good command of a  foreign

language,others, however,take the negative attitude.            

From personal perspective, i prefer to learn a foreign language as my inclination.First of all, a language is a bridge

between people from different countries.children, obviously, having a sharp mind and great acceptance of new subjects,can

easily grasp  the key point of a foreign language in a short time.moreover,brain is a magnificant treasure trove waiting for

people to explore,therefore, why don't we try  when we are still young?Finally, commanding a foreign language also means an

available job oppotunity for children in future. Although people easily neglect the genuinely potential advantages of

learning a foreign language for children,i do advocate for it.
 
the main idea of opponents is that children should spare no effort to their first language.however,in another aspect to view

this question,the potential profits outweigh the defects some people having said. it is doubtless that foreign language would

stimulate children' enthusiasm to learn more than the language itself.Culture,history,custom,the origin of the language can

also assist the children to identify the differences between each language in such an effective way,which still generate far

-reaching influence on mother tongue.

As far as i am concerned,a good command of foreign language is an ascendance for children rather than barrier .'time and tide

wait for no man '.children,with so much leisure time and willing to have a specifi skill,ought to devote themselves to the

learning of foreign language.

So, where is the TOPIC?