年轻人要有策划组织能力！麻烦大家来看下我写的啊，我马上准别考了

                                            young people should have organizational politics

people in different country may have different opinion in the same qusetion therefore it is hard to say right or false.Some people think young people should not  have organizational politics.but I think we have to learn some organizational politics

To pratice srganizational politics is useful more than read the book in the school .it was my summer holiday ,it can not be boring more i thought.because i have nothing to do but sleep .one day my girlfriend call me and suggested me to go hiking with her.at first i thought it is an wonderful idea.but the problem has alread come,i have never do a organizational poitics .It is difficult to me to make a great organizational thus I ask for my girlfriend to make a organizational politics together,but,she said how failing you are.I lose my face at that time and it is so bad i have ever get in my life

In this experience i know people who does not have organizational politics that you may lose your girlfriend.just like me.

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