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综合写作好象是19号的呵。

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楼主
发表于 2007-1-27 22:24:00 | 只看该作者

综合写作好象是19号的呵。

水里加氟好不好?
沙发
发表于 2007-1-27 22:25:00 | 只看该作者
对的,就是这道
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2007-1-27 22:30:00 | 只看该作者

例子:加氟自来水(adding fluoride in public water
reading
在自来水中加氟的好处
1.防止蛀牙
2.杀死细菌
3.对骨骼有好处(decrease bone diseases

lecture

反驳
1.自来水并不会留在口中,对防止蛀牙没有帮助
2.氟会与输水管(water pipe)中的化学物质反应,产生有毒物质,其危害大于细菌
3.过量的氟会使骨骼变脆
例文:
The speaker refutes the reading's argument about the benefits of adding fluoride to pipe water by providing contradictory evidence about pipe water's fluoride's effectiveness in preventing cavities in teeth, killing bacteria, and decreasing bone diseases.

    First, the speaker points out that the short contact of fluoride with teeth will not enable the fluoride to prevent cavities, as the reading argues. Instead, the water will pass the mouth and teeth quickly and go directly to the stomach.

Another argument raised in the lecture is that fluoride could undergo chemical reactions with heavy metals in the pipe, such as lead. This will create toxic substances which will pose serious health threat. In this way fluoride could be even more deadly than bacteria. Although the fluoride, as the reading says, will kill some bacteria, the cure here is worse than the disease.

In the end, the speaker maintains that overdose of fluoride will backfire to human bones. Although the reading illustrates that fluoride will improve bone strength, the lecture says overdose will cause serious damage to human bones.
            

地板
 楼主| 发表于 2007-1-27 22:30:00 | 只看该作者

是原来的真题,还说不会出原来的考题。ETS又骗人。

5#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-1-27 22:31:00 | 只看该作者
先进去不好,我第一个进去,第一篇阅读全蒙。惨了。
6#
发表于 2007-1-27 22:40:00 | 只看该作者
我第二点中的lead没听出来。原来是铅
7#
发表于 2007-1-27 22:46:00 | 只看该作者
第一点中还有一个分论点,日常生活中还有很多source可以得到氟,比如说tooth paste中就有。所以在饮用水中加氟是浪费。
8#
发表于 2007-1-28 10:23:00 | 只看该作者

好好学习,受益匪浅

9#
发表于 2007-1-28 22:50:00 | 只看该作者
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