第一次写托福作文，请大虾们拍转

When I was ten years old, my family moved from a little town to a large city. I met my first friend who was more than sixty years old. She was a happy lady though she lost her spouse ten years ago when I met her. She did exercise every morning and had four meals a day. So it kept her a healthy body. She even played Play Station 2 with me to kill spare time. She enjoyed her life much better than a lot of young men who were fighting for the wealth or reputation all day long. Thus I think it is partial to say that young people enjoy life much better than older people.

More experiences will give old people much more tips of leading a high-quality life. As a matter of fact, people who is twenty years old can not do full time job on the cooking because of clinging to his work or assignment. While the older people may have more time to learn the cuisine and practice it to improve their lives. Many years of living taught old people a bunch of skills in solving problems in many fields of day life. It is the exclusive treasure that young people never had. For instance, fixing a broken faucet that causes a whole morning to the young people may takes the old people about thirty minutes. The problem solving skills can make older person’s life more comfortable. That is why more and more young people tend to live with their parents when they are over sixteen to get a easy life.

In city after city across the country, old people that were over sixty became the major consumer of the travelling all over the world’s places of interest. They have long period of time to make them a full view of another country or natural landscape. More importantly, they can afford the expensive travel, for they worked a lot of years and had substantial foundation of money. The older people also can have more chance to meet another old person when they do the morning exercise in park or playground. They have a lot of communication with other people, though young people can hardly get that kind of opportunity. Taking into account these facts, I think the young people can not compete with old people in these time-consuming entertainments.

Youth also can give young person some privileges in many field of living, such as fashion ,popular music and something else. But nowadays, aged people also can go after fashion and enjoy popular music while people becaming more and more open-minded. Yesterday I saw an old man in a fashionable clothes drove a porshe race car with loud music played. No doubt he enjoyed his own happy life. It is never fair to say that old people are insulated to fashion any more.

From all points of view above, we may safely draw the conclusion that old people also can enjoy their lives not worse than young man. The society will be more and more used to high-quality lives of aged people. And the prejudice that young people enjoy life much better than older people will be proved to be wrong. It will be some day I grow old, and I will definitely enjoy my life as much as I do now.

30分钟模考，改过了。写的手都麻了……

不少。。估计你可以拿到4

山衔斑竹说一下吧……第一次写实在是下了好大勇气的……