og13 104求解答

ricoody · 发表于 2013-5-25 00:26:15

104. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,

(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations

(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

A B的错误在哪？ coordinating不可能修饰illustration只能作伴随状语 them唯一指代肯定是illustration 不妥之处在何处？

ricoody · 发表于 2013-5-25 00:55:12

in her book illustrations, BP,carefully coordinating them with her narratives, 这样对么

suzibi · 发表于 2013-5-25 01:10:29

ricoody 发表于 2013-5-25 00:55
in her book illustrations, BP,carefully coordinating them with her narratives, 这样对么

不对
是BP coordinated book illustrations with her narratives.
A 选项coordinating有做状语修饰BP主句的嫌疑，而不是修饰in her illustrations B也一样
Cwhich指代illustration, 清楚明了
在指代修饰不清楚的情况下，最好用从句，这样比较明了

enkyklios · 发表于 2013-5-25 06:11:14

them显然没有指代啊兄弟，，凭空来一个代词怎么能行？
我觉得我还是给你造一个中文的句子，你对比一下；在深山里，我看见它。你看见的是什么？是深山吗？显然不是！对不对？
回到本题，them也一样不能去指代in 后边的名词

当语法，语感都不够好的时候我觉得把它变成一个中文的句子也是一个方法。毕竟汉语千年来没有语法的，它的语法都是根据英语来的。所以可以对照一下。
当然最好是用英语的思维处理英语。
this case OG says 'them' can not refer 'illustrations' as 'illustrations' is object of preposition. When I come across this problem I'm just getting confused. Ron can you pls explain this.

my #1 advice:
just MEMORIZE this as a case of something that is wrong.
seriously.
don't worry too hard about why; just remember that "things that look like this are wrong".
i am not kidding; that is BY FAR the easiest way to become competent at identifying these sorts of errors.

in fact, i have no idea of the formal explanation for this error; as a seasoned

bejamin1111 · 发表于 2013-5-25 11:03:24

这是modifier的问题，a，coordinating修饰illustration错误，illustration并不能发出coordinating的动作. B，coordinating引导的modifier夹心修饰，即可以向前修饰illustrations，又可以向后修饰BP，修饰不清。记住两个modifier连用的用法一般都不对就ok

suzibi · 发表于 2013-5-25 23:27:28

bejamin1111 发表于 2013-5-25 11:03
这是modifier的问题，a，coordinating修饰illustration错误，illustration并不能发出coordinating的动作. B ...

Bejamin,我不太同意你的观点，coordinating这个成分的确是修饰illustration的，但是illustration不可以作为coordinating的逻辑主语，而是宾语，这个动作只能是人发出的，所以A&B错，因为他们存在修饰歧义。
如果是错的，还请指正

bejamin1111 · 发表于 2013-5-26 00:18:47

suzibi 发表于 2013-5-25 23:27
Bejamin,我不太同意你的观点，coordinating这个成分的确是修饰illustration的，但是illustration不可以作 ...

没错没错！coordinating them中them指代illustrations,但是这个modifier的逻辑主语是BP,中间隔了in her book illustrations另外一个modifier,逻辑主语和modifier之间的距离太远导致修饰上的不准确。感谢指正！

suzibi · 发表于 2013-5-26 08:00:11

bejamin1111 发表于 2013-5-26 00:18
没错没错！coordinating them中them指代illustrations,但是这个modifier的逻辑主语是BP,中间隔了in her b ...

Hliujing · 发表于 2013-5-26 09:27:35

分词夹心修饰啊，修饰太灵活，不如定语从句语义清晰。而且A选项主谓之间距离太远 not good

ricoody · 发表于 2013-5-26 22:58:21

enkyklios 发表于 2013-5-25 06:11
them显然没有指代啊兄弟，，凭空来一个代词怎么能行？
我觉得我还是给你造一个中文的句子，你对比一下；在 ...

那就是代词指代一般都是指句子中心内容咯？比如i see a car that looks like a train, and it.......... it指代有问题否？

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