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162. Some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year. Do you think these people deserve such high salaries? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Whether entertainment is a hot topic recently, there is a hot topic about whether some famous athletes and entertainers should earn much money or not. Different people hold different opinions due to their distinct experience and backgrounds. Some people think that they deserve such high salaries. Others, however, prefer the opposite. If I were faced with this issue, I would probably follow the former one. In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my viewpoint.

First of all, the reason that we cannot neglect is that famous athletes and entertainers can arise some issues that we should notice. Facts witness and present many examples. I remember when I was a kid, I liked a signer very much. I always watched TV shows, if he performed on the shows. He always told his fans that everyone should love their pets and should not discard them. He also founded a foundation to protect animals. Because he was really famous, so many people donated money to help this foundation. Of course, he donated much money which is a really huge number. I think there are no better examples than this one to demonstrate this point more clearly.

In the second place, everyone can see another head and chief reason that I have chosen to put here. When there are some earthquakes or some bad things which happened in the world, famous athletes and entertainers will donate their money and do their best to help others. Because they are famous, they can earn more money than do we to help others and communicate some important thoughts to many people. If you can see this, you can understand it more deeply.

Surely, there is no denying that there are few disadvantages in certain circumstances. For instance, some people think some of the athletes and entertainers just sing or win a game, because they are lucky. They make money too easy. They are bad models to let children think that they also do not work hard and then they also can earn much money. But we cannot know how they struggle before they success, we cannot say something like that. However, this alone does not lend any strong support to weaken what I have supported. When the advantages and disadvantages are carefully compared, the most striking conclusion is obvious.

Taking into account all these factors discussed above, which sometimes can intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, we can safely come to the conclusion that famous athletes and entertainers should earn such high salaries. In the fact, not only I prefer to think that, but also prefer to hope they can have good behavior to teach many people as much as possible.

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