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俺这个月27号考,刚开始练习写作, 这是俺写的第一篇, 感觉还是写的很不顺畅, 恳请大家提些宝贵意见!!也不知这样水平的文章能混多少分? 心里焦急的很! 谢谢大家.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? a zoo has no useful purpose.
There are still lots of zoos in our country, no matter their size and type . Everyday, zoos are crowded with visitors from different places. I think that a zoo definitely has a useful purpose.
The first purpose of a zoo is to give children or adults a chance to know animals and care for them. In the zoo, we can see some endangered animals, such as Dongbei Tigers , pandas , whose life are still threaten by changed environment that is caused by over-hunting, pollution and overpopulation. There are lots of signs and introductions in front of the animal cages, which shows us some knowledge about animals' life and important information that animals need protection and care from human beings. If we did not treat the nature well, protect our environment, the animals would disappear from this world very soon.
Another useful goal is to provide an entertainment place for people who live in the city. We know, cities is so crowded with buildings and cars that it is difficult for people to find a place relax and breathe fresh air. Fortunately, a zoo provides this chance. Children can play in it, people can do Taiji in it and students can have a quiet environment to study in the sunshine.
Take into account of these reasons, it is easy to reach the conclusion that a zoo has a useful purpose. In the future, there will be more wild zoos, in which animals will not live in cages , instead a huge wild land. Oppositely, visitors would stay in the cages to watch animals.
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发表于 2005-7-8 05:02:00
