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When asked about this question, many people have different opinions. Some people prefer to spend their entire life in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives. As far as I am concerned, I would like to live in different places in my live .My arguments for that point are listed as follows.

The first reason for my propensity to make this choice is because my future is more important than the place where I live. As we all know, the business world is becoming more and more competitive. Therefore, we all have to learn to speak the second language and have the international mindset. For example, after I graduated from university, I have a chance to work in a international company .However, I had to live off my hometown and rented a house near the company .This is my first time to live off my hometown, but I cherish this chance to meet colleagues from different countries and thus horn my communication skill.

The second reason which is known by everybody is that we have to take care of the education of our children. In Taiwan, most people have only one or two child and therefore they want their children get best education. Many parents bought expensive houses near best schools in order to let their children to be cleverer than others. Besides, parents always pay lots of attention on children's safety. Therefore, when parents have their kids, they would like to move to other safer places.

The third reason which is still obvious is that people want to live in quiet and beautiful places after they retire .In a modern society, most people live in the urban area in order to find good jobs and spare more time for commuting between the office and home. However, living in the urban area means you have to tolerate bad traffic problems, air pollution, and other social problems .Moreover, based on a recent statistics report presented by Taiwan government, people who live in the rural area live longer than people who live in urban area. Therefore, if we want to live longer, we have better to move to the rural area with a mild climate.

Based on the reasons discussed above, I think that my future, my children, and my live are more important than the place where I live. Therefore, if there are better places to match these three issues I present above, I would like to move to that place.

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