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集合了几个模板而成，想问有问题没有？特别是结尾。

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When it comes to a new epoch, people always face the dilemma to choose whether AAA or BBB.  This problem is the much debated one in that it affects everybody in their daily lives. Although some people think that …, I am, and probably will always be, one of those who argue that …

Here I would explain a few of the most important reasons.  The main reason is that ---.  To illustrate this, there is an appropriate example that is very persuasive: ---.

Furthermore, sociological studies have found that … This significant point, however, is often not noticed by most people and accordingly, is unconsciously overlooked.

What’s more, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why I would choose to …

Finally, as a proverb says, “Everything has two sides”.  Although I admit that there are a couple of advantages of ----, I still think that the disadvantages of it are more obvious.  Such as ---, ----, and ----.  This demonstrates that we have no complete evidence to suggest that BBB is always better than AAA.

Taking into account all these factors, we will find out that the advantages of AAA outweigh those of BBB.  Therefore from what we have discussed, we may safely come to the conclusion that choosing AAA is a rather wise decision.  But I have not denied the opinion that choosing BBB.  I must admit that people can do well without AAA, but no one can ignore the added convenience and satisfaction offered by AAA. Such experience will definitely be helpful in one’s later life.

Why does nobody try to help me?

不错，模版差不多都这样子