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发表于 2013-8-13 15:06:41 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
  第一次写那么多字,虽然花了远远不止半个钟,然后这文章会不会模板痕迹太重。。T T 作文一直很烂请莫鄙视。。。

      With regard to the debate about whether theperspectives of celebrated persons are not essential for older people thanyounger people, people tend to hold different opinions but mainly the followingtwo: some think that the importance of these opinions are equal to both youthand old people, while others believe that older people couldn’t absorb the coreof celebrities’ ideas. From my prospective, I prefer to endorse that theopinions of famous people don’t play an important role on older people sincethey not only care more about family but also have their own social values andprinciples.



      Admittedly, in social life, we can stillnotice that some entertainers actually have created some influence on our parents.For instance, there are a popular TV play in China called ” the biography of ZhenHuan”. And the main character in this TV play is Zhen Huan. This actor has a remarkablecharacter and a good performing skill, so this actress has a great amount ofolder fans which have learned the social values and communicating skill fromZhen Huan. However, it doesn’t mean that    celebrities’ opinion are import for olderpeople than youth.



      One main reason that we have to consider iswhen people grow old, each of them have their own family, as is known to all,for most married people in China, family has been putted in the first place.Therefore, many older people only care about what happens in their house, whenthey comment the opinions of politicians or entertainers, I believe most ofthem will say, “It’s none of my business.” For example, my mother is also afamily-center person, she is common people so I believe she can represent mostof older people in China. I have a great interest in watching tennis games, andthere are a famous Chinese female tennis player called Li Na. I’m such a crazyfan of her that every competition she plays in China, I’ll be at the games andcheer for Li Na. But my mother couldn’t understand my behaviors, she said “sheis just a simple athlete, I don’t know why you do such stupid behaviors.” Mymother also doesn’t interest in what happen in China or in world, she has herlife, and there are lots of affair she might deal with every day. In this case,we can find that older people might not interest in what celebrities say, so it’snot essential for older people to catch famous person ideas than young people.

    Furthermore, after learning and training inone’s growth, people have formed a stable social values and principles, sotheir minds are sometimes irreversible. It’s hard for us to reform their habits and thinking patterns, and so do the celebrities. The older people are not preparedto change the way of thinking, if someone require them to receive the ideas ofentertainers or athletes who are younger and more fashionable than olderpeople, they will not grasp the people’s opinions firmly or even think whatthey say are ridiculous. Therefore, we can notice that the importance ofcelebrities’ perspectives for older people are not as vital as it does foryounger people.

   

      After taking all the above aspects inconsideration, I firmly believe that famous people’sideas have little influence on the older people due to the stable social valuesthey formed. Instead, the same opinions the celebrities say will have a moreeffective impacts on the younger people.     

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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-14 16:34:03 | 只看该作者
Do youagree or disagree with the following statement: Governments and companiesshould share their scientific discoveries with others
   
    With regard to debate about whether the discoveries of Government and companies should be responsible to share with others, people tend to hold different opinions but mainly the following two: some think that we, common person, have rights to know what government and companies have done and the sharing of technique would benefit the development of social technique, while others, in contrast, are unlikely to see these thing happened, the governments and companies is afraid that other government or companies will surpass them through utilizing and developing their discoveries. From my perspective, I incline to support the former opinion.

     Undoubtedly, if governments and companies share their scientific finds, these finds can be researched by other institutes, and maybe some institutes which are fall behind on this realm will grasp this opportunity to catch up with the leading companies and even surpass them. It’s just like you breed a tiger and the tiger finally eat you. However, it doesn’t mean that all the institutes who release their discoveries will occur such a terrible affair. In fact, there is lots of benefices for those institutes to share their finds.

      On one hand, share their scientific discoveries with others can boost the growth of these scientific realm. If they don’t share the ideas, and they want to monopoly the technique, maybe their creativities is not enough for them to develop their own products, and eventually they only create an immature products. Therefore, through sharing their discoveries, the other company can make a further research on this discoveries and the discoveries will be developed more and more mature. As a result, the discoveries could be utilized in practice and totally become a practical products. For instance, Android is a telephone system created by Google company. Android system is not resemble the Apple’s IOS system, is freed for every telephone companies and each of the companies or person can modify the system and make it more practical and useful. As a result, after 5 years’ development of Android system, Android system is the most widely deployed mobile platform. Thus you can notice how importance it is to share the technical discoveries with others.
         
      On the other hand, the governments and companies share their discoveries with others can cultivate the phenomenon of technological innovation. It can attract more and more adolescent to get in touch with such technology, improve their cognitive level on scientific technique.

      After taking all the above aspects in consideration, I firmly believe that sharing of scientific discoveries by institutes are the keystones underlying these institutes’ prosperity and it would also give opportunities to some youth who love to get in touch with scientific technique. Therefore, I agree the statement.  
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