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发表于 2004-12-27 05:13:00 | 只看该作者

[求助]tew21 ~扶小弟一把吧,恳请指点~

With the accelerating development of modern life, people are living longer than before, because of the benefits of a healthier diet, doing exercises and more effective medical treatment.



In the past, people have had no idea with the nutrition in their daily diet and they always have some bad habits of getting food. Some kids like meat and often eat their meals without vegetables, which causes them to gain more weight  This will bring many health problems later on in life, both physically and mentally. However, nowadays, people can avoid such kinds of situations by getting suggestions from nutritionists when they are young.



Besides diet, another issue is that people are doing more exercises than before.. Compared with the past, people today have many options for exercising. It is much more convenient to get fit now and there are many communities offering outdoor facilities for the public to exercise. Despite encountering bad weather, people can also do sports in a gym. Moreover, with there are coaches giving advice to guide them to exercise more efficiently.



It goes without saying that the medical area has improved dramatically. When people have the flue or a cough, they can now just take a small pill instead of taking an injection. People can also have daily required vitamins which help them  avoid  many kinds of infections. Being checked by modern medical machinery, people can find many hidden diseases in their bodies and heal those in time.



Living longer will be an inevitable tendency as long as people pay more attention to their health. With a good diet and necessary activities, it will bring people a more enjoyable and healthy life.


沙发
发表于 2004-12-27 13:12:00 | 只看该作者
好文,语言地道,简洁,论证有力。
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2004-12-28 00:12:00 | 只看该作者
请问一下,STONE大哥~`这样的文章最多拿几分呢
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