阿伦艾弗森的作文

阿伦艾弗森 · 发表于 2012-12-11 00:33:01

12月10日独立写作

Social life can always give us happy time when we get tired of our daily life. We can go outside with our friends to have a picnic, to play basketball or to dance at night club. These happiness, however, can not be compared with the happiness providing by our jobs because jobs can help us achieve our dreams, give others a hand and have a happy atmosphere in our family.

First of all, Since I was a child, I had dream to travel around the world and eaten all of the delicious food in different countries. However, I don't have enough money to do so. When I get a job, it can help me to raise money and one day I can use those money to travel around the world. These money which I get from my job can afford my train tickets, my hotel price and my souvenirs. Without my job, I could not achieve my dream and might just stay in my town during life time.

Secondly, when we have a job, we may have the ability to help others who need our help. Jobs can not only embody our responsibility in ourselves, but also enable us to overcome the difficult situations in our society. That's why many rich people , such as Bill Gates, Buffett and so on so forth, are both entrepreneurs and philanthropists. There jobs can help them get much money, and then, they use these money to help others. This could not be achieved by attending social life.

Thirdly, having a job can also provides us a good atmosphere in our family. After a whole day's exhausting work, we can share with our family about our anecdotes in our companies and get a relaxed time. By changing the ideas happened in our work place, we are close to each other and more understand each other. Everyone becomes more considerable. Whereas, if I am addicted to social life day by day, my families will be disappointed to me and not want to communicate with me anymore.

In conclusion, jobs can provide us more happy than social life does. Our goals, our family happiness and our warm-hearted all can be achieved and finished by our jobs.

阿伦艾弗森 · 发表于 2012-12-11 01:24:17

12月10日综合写作。TPO5

the reading passage mainly provides us with three usages of the settlements of Chaco Canyon. The professor deals with the same issue. However, he thinks that none of the arguments provide by reading is convincing.

Firstly, the reading discusses that Chaco structures were used for residents living. In contrast, the professor claims that though the structures outside look like the architecture for living, the inside of the structure were not used for living. They have the space which could be lived for hundreds of people, but they don't have many fire place for hundreds people daily cooking. They just have few fire place and the largest room in the structure just have the fire place which only could be used for 10 people.

Secondly, the reading makes the point that the structures may use for storing food supply. Whereas the professor demonstrates that though it sounds plausible that the structure used for food supply, they do not have maise containers and any trace for food. So the structures could not be a place to store grain.

Thirdly, the reading states that the structures may be a place for ceremonial centers. The professor casts doubts that the structures contain not only broken pots but also other materials for building such as sand, stones and so on so forth. These materials might be trash which did not be used when the house built up. Also, those pots might be the containers of food for construction workers.

阿伦艾弗森 · 发表于 2012-12-11 21:55:25

Professional tutors can always help us with our lessons; they can illustrate knowledge in the most absorbable way and use different strategies for different children. We, however, sometimes are very busy and have no spare time to help our classmates and friends, So I think if my friend need help in some courses, I'd like to suggest him to ask tutor for help.

First of all, most of tutors have abundant experience and they know how to teach students in the effective ways. They can use vivid language to illustrate their courses so that children can understand. Experienced teachers such as math teachers may know how to make students to remember formulas during students hearing an anecdote of Gauss or Archimedes. Their broaden knowledge can help them put others courses' knowledge into their own use. However, though I am good at math in my class, I can not illustrate an axiom clearly to my classmates.

Secondly, knowing the different students' different characteristic, tutors can use many kinds of ways for diverse students. Such as some students are likely to get knowledge from their own reading, so tutors can list some books for them so that students can learn by themselves. Others, however, may tend to understand knowledge from group discussing, and tutors can discuss problems with them. Also, many students need to do experiments because only using this way, they can fully know the usage of physics. Different students have different requirements. Tutors always know how to sacrifice them and which ways fit for them. Whereas if the classmates ask me to help them, I can just use my own strategy and it may have no use for them.

Thirdly, as a high school student. I have few spare time to teach my friend. I have 8 courses everyday and some of them are tough for me. I need more time to deal with my weak courses so that I can better prepared for my university life. My study schedule is regular and if I use my time to teach my friend, I may have less time for my own study. I remembered once one of my classmates lily ask me to help her math before the final examination and I agreed. So everyday I used half an hour to teach help math problems and these time I used to plan to study my own problems. Finally, I just got a "B" in my examination because I cannot solve 3 tough problems. I felt disappointed about my grade. After that I found that I can not ensure my grades when use my time to help others.

In conclusion, I still think that find a tutor to help friend solve their problems in study is better than help them by myself.

45573asdasd · 发表于 2012-12-11 22:56:14

Professional tutors can always help us with our lessons; they can illustrate knowledge in the most absorbable way and use different strategies for different children. We, however, sometimes are very busy and have no spare time to help our classmates and friends, So I think if my friend need help in some courses, I'd like to suggest him to ask a tutor for help.

First of all, most of tutors have abundant experience and they know how to teach students in ~~the~~ effective ways. They can use vivid language to illustrate their courses so that children can understand. Experienced teachers such as math teachers may know how to make students to remember formulas during students hearing an anecdote of Gauss or Archimedes（cool）. Their broaden knowledge can help them put others courses' knowledge into their own use. However, though I am good at math in my class, I can not illustrate an axiom clearly to my classmates.
（真的很好，没错误且精确）

Secondly, knowing the different students' different characteristics, tutors can use many kinds of ways for diverse students. Such as some students are likely to get knowledge from their own reading, so tutors can list some books for them so that students can learn by themselves. Others, however, may tend to understand knowledge from group discussing, and tutors can discuss problems with them. Also, many students need to do experiments because only using this way, they can fully know the usage of physics（这三个例子太多了，且有重复之嫌，建议删掉一个，或者把其中一个论证充分一些）. Different students have different requirements. Tutors always know how to sacrifice them and which ways fit for them. Whereas if the classmates ask me to help them, I can just use my own strategy and it may have no use for them.

Thirdly, as a high school student. I have ~~few~~less time spare time to teach my friend. I have 8（T中少用字母或者缩写） courses everyday and some of them are tough for me. I need more time to deal with my weak courses so that I can better prepared for my university life. My study schedule is regular ~~and~~两个句字之间不用逗号，否则属于run-on。if I use my time to teach my friend, I may have less time for my own study. I remembered once one of my classmates lily ask me to help her math before the final examination and I agreed. Soeveryday I used half an hour to teach ~~help~~ math problems and（又是两套主谓在一个句子） these time I used to plan to study my own problems. Finally, I just got a "B" in my examination because I cannot solve 3 tough problems. I felt disappointed about my grade. After that I found that I can not ensure my grades when use my time to help others.

In conclusion, I still think that find a tutor to help friend solve their problems in study is better than help them by myself.

lz是高中生吗？很厉害，建议多备一些句子再使用一些修辞。会锦上添花的，也看看我的

阿伦艾弗森 · 发表于 2012-12-11 22:58:12

The reading passage mainly provides us with three disadvantages of online encyclopedia. The professor deals with the same issue. However, she thinks that none of the encyclopedia can be perfect.

Firstly, the reading discusses that contributors online often provide inaccurate information and they are lack of academic credentials. In contrast, the professor claims that traditional encyclopedias are not perfect either. We can not find a book without mistakes. It is easy for online encyclopedia to be corrected; however, the mistakes will remain in print encyclopedias forever.

Secondly, the reading makes the point that some unscrupulous users may corrupt the information provided by online encyclopedias. Whereas the professor demonstrates two solutions to solve this problem. One is to put crucial factors of the passage into formula and no one can change that information; the other one is to hire an editor who monitors the changing of online information.

Thirdly, the reading states that online encyclopedias have broaden knowledge and sometimes focus on trivial topics frequently. The professor casts doubts that the group of academic people who choose the topic written in traditional encyclopedia can not stand the most of the people's interest. Online encyclopedias have variety of articles and can sacrifice the diversity interest of different people. This would be an advantage of online encyclopedias.

阿伦艾弗森 · 发表于 2012-12-13 00:04:59

Nowadays there is a growing awareness that college and university should not only teach students knowledge but also offer preparation before they leave the university and find jobs. Preparing early in university for our work can help us have a better relationship with our workmates, know what work are really fit for us and put the theoretical knowledge into practical use.

Firstly, a common problem occurred in universities and colleges now is that students nowadays are lack of ability to communicate and cooperate with others. The most normal things our students communicate with are books and we have few time to cooperate with other students. When we prepare our future work, we can have more opportunities to cooperate with others and know how to deal with the problems between each other. After our preparation in school, we can have a good relationship with our workmates in the future workplace.

Secondly, before we enter our real work, we really don't know which work is the most suitable for ourselves. Universities and colleges provide much different courses so that we don't know what is favourite do we like. So after graduating from our schools, we always confuse about what work should we take. In order to overcome this problem, universities should provide us chances to prepare about our work so that we can find wether that work is fit us or not. When we find that we really don't like that job, we still have chance to change into another major.

Thirdly, the difference between the university life and work time is that during the university life, we always study theoretical knowledge; whereas when we start our work time, most of time we need to put those knowledge into practical use. It is better for universities and colleges to give us a stage to turn theories into usages. Using this way, we will start our works easily and will not need to use much time to get used to the new environment. Companies and work places will be satisfied with us and our universities can also get a good reputation because they help us prepare the work before.

In conclusion, with the preparation in our university and college, we learn how to cooperate with workmates, to find the work we really like and to know the using way of our knowledge.

阿伦艾弗森 · 发表于 2012-12-13 00:46:25

The reading passage mainly provides us with three reasons that companies should not purchase their products as ecocertified. The professor deals with the same issue; however, he thinks that none of these reasons are reasonable.

Firstly, the reading discusses that American consumers now do not trust advertisements. In contrast, the professor claims that not all the advertisements are same. Americans consumers can differentiate their differences and they have confidence in independent consumers.

Secondly, the reading makes the point that consumers would not purchase products certified more expensive than those of uncertified. Whereas the professor demonstrates that consumers would not choose the products which are much higher than those of the same. Consumers would not pay attention to the price which is less than five percent higher. Also, they are really pay attention to the environment.

Thirdly, the reading states that econcertified products make sense just when they are abroad. The professor casts doubts that the label of ecocertified products are not aimed for foreign consumers but foreign companies. If the companies in US have no capturing point for the American consumers, they would not buy the products produced by domestic companies but buy them from foreign markets.

正儿八经潜水 · 发表于 2012-12-13 17:24:39

12.12.独立修改
Nowadays there is a growing awareness that college and university should not only teach students knowledge but also offer preparation before they leave the university and find jobs. Preparing early in university for our work can help us have a better relationship with our workmates, know what work ~~are~~ is really fit for us and put the theoretical knowledge into practical use.

Firstly, a common problem occurred in universities and colleges now is that students nowadays are lack of ability to ofcommunicating and cooperating with others. The most normal things our students communicate with are books and we have few time to cooperate with other students. Whenwe arepreparing for our future work, we can have more opportunities to cooperate with others and know how to deal with the problems between each other. After our preparation in school, we can have a good relationship with our workmates in the future workplace.

Secondly, before we enter our real work, we really don't know which work is the most suitable for ourselves. Universities and colleges provide ~~much~~ many different courses so that we don't know ~~what~~ whichisourfavourite ~~do we like~~. So after graduating from our schools, we always confuse about what work ~~should~~ we should take. In order to overcome this problem, universities should provide us chances to prepare ~~about~~ for our work so that we can find wether that work is fit us or not. When we find that we really don't like that job, we still have chance to change into another~~major~~ job.

Thirdly, the difference between the university life and work time is that during the university life, we always study theoretical knowledge; whereas when we start our work time, most of time we need to put those knowledge into practical use. It is better for universities and colleges to give us a stage to turn theories into usages. Using this way, we will start our works easily and will not need to use much time to get used to the new environment. Companies and work places will be satisfied with(主语应该是人，调换一下)us and our universities can also get a good reputation because they help us prepare for the work before.

In conclusion, with the preparation in our university and college, we learn how to cooperate with workmates, to find the work we really like and to know the using way of our knowledge.

阿伦艾弗森 · 发表于 2012-12-14 01:35:08

Considering which quality is the most important for those people who are successful, many of us always think the communication skill is the most important. However, I think there remain other characters that are also important such as the spirit of never giving up, the aim to be innovative and hard-working.

Firstly, a person who wants to stand at the highest place in his career must know that they should not give up when they meet some problems. Focusing on one aim and then achieve it, we can benefit from what we do and even contribute to whole society. Thomas edison, as one of the most famous scientists in the U.S, did more than thousands of times in his light experiments and almost use everything for filament. Everyone at that time thought he would not succeed. Whereas his never giving up attitude finally helped him to find most suitable filament and labeled him as a successful man.

Secondly, innovated products can always attract our eye balls. It is important for successful men to develop innovative thinking. Not only can they gain profit by this way, but also they can change our life style and lead our life more convenient. Apple company, which defines our century' way of communicate, exceeded other companies because of its creative innovations. The company turned the uncomfortable keyboard into flat screen and mobile phones' perfect appearances defeat those of most of other cellphones.

Thirdly, once a reporter asked the famous basketball play Kobe Bryant how can he be so successful. However, Kobe asked the reporter:"do you know what's the weather like in 4 a.m of Los Angeles". Success does not happen by accident. Only by exercise and hard-working, can we achieve amazing accomplishment. A person who is lazy and doesn't want to pay his energy in his work can not succeed at all. It is important for us to take more time into work in order to be successful.

In conclusion, from the examples I mentioned above, insisting, innovating, and diligence are also important for a man to achieve success.

阿伦艾弗森 · 发表于 2012-12-14 02:10:17

The reading passage mainly provides us with three reasons that the details of the memoir of Chevalier de Seingalt are not all accurate. The professor deals with the same issue. However, she thinks that these claims provided by Chevalier are reliable.

Firstly, the reading discusses that if Chevalier was really rich, he would have not borrow money from other merchants. In contrast, the professor claims that he borrowed money doesn't mean he was poor at that time. We all know that he spent huge money in parties and gamblings. Though he was rich, it would take him few days to covert access to cash and before that, he should borrow money.

Secondly, the reading makes the point that critics think it is impossible for him to remember every details of the conversation he made with others. Whereas the professor demonstrates that he took notes every night after he had conversation with famous person and he always took out those notes to read them.

Thirdly, the reading states that he might bribe the jailers but not use metal to escape from prison. The professor casts doubts that other prisoners knew even more powerful politically well-connected friends but the jailers were not bribed by them. In addition, soon after he escaped from prison, the ceiling of prison was repaired.

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