简历求狠批，求拍砖，求建议！！！！题目长！！！！！！

香樟立夏 · 发表于 2012-10-20 16:37:19

Zhao XXX (Miss)
XXX Avenue, Room XXX
Wuhan, Hubei, P.R. China 430022
86-152-0000-0000 XXXXXX@163.com">@163.com

Education

2009 - presentNortheast Forestry University,Harbin, P.R. China (key university of 211 project)

BA, Information Management and Information System (IMIS), July 2013

GPA: Overall 89.89/100 (Top 3% of Institute, 3/89 of IMIS major )

Membership: Enterprise Resource Planning Associate, Programming Associate

Honors-Awarded: National scholarship (3% of students all over P.R. China),

University Top Scholarship, Model Carder Award for community leadership

Triple-AOutstanding Student Prize in three successive years, University

Learning Star Prize, Third Prize in Hope Star English Talent Competition,

Third Prize in “Hope, Dream and Idea” Speech Competition

Academic Activities

10/2011-11/2011 C Language Programming Project computer laboratory at university

●completed a12-hourhorological programming

●completed the logging in programme segment of Online Course Selection System

06/2011-08/2011 National Management Decision Competition

● used a software to analyze integrated business information flows of a virtual

company to decide orientation, price, output, sales strategy of a virtual product, won

second prize in the semi-final

Internship experience

06/2012-07/2012Neusoft CorporationShenyang, P.R. China

The largest IT solutions and services provider in China

Java Programming Trainee

● Analyzed the process of Customer Relationship Management with teammates

● Designed 5 function modules of Customer Relationship Management System

● Established, connected and maintained the database of the system

06/2010-07/2010Neusoft CorporationShenyang, P.R. China

Management Trainee

● Analyzed the development direction of computer programming language

● Analyzed available career direction for Information management undergraduates

02/2010-03/2010 COFCO Leconte Chocolate CompanyXiantao, P.R. China

COFCO Group is China's largest food processing, manufacturer and trader (Top 500)

Salesperson

● sold all chocolate in one supermarket on Valentine's day, sales are nearly $5,000

● persuaded a big customer to buy 100 boxes of chocolates with 3% discount

Additional Information

Fluent in Mandarin Chinese;Member of Information School Organization Department 2009-2010;

Member of University Technology Innovation Centre 2009-2010; Leader of Information School

Technology Department 2010-2011; Harbin Resthome Volunteer; National Computer Rank II

酱子啊 · 发表于 2012-10-20 17:04:46

申请CS吧~~很牛哦~~~

风静静 · 发表于 2012-10-20 17:24:09

坐标跟我一样~~~

dreamingkiddie · 发表于 2012-10-20 17:46:12

CV整体的感觉不错啊。不过LZ可以考虑把一些internship的职责合并一下，另外加上achievement。PS:那个情人节巧克力好有爱啊！

香樟立夏 · 发表于 2012-10-20 18:20:32

请问加上一个achievement写什么呢？

香樟立夏 · 发表于 2012-10-20 18:21:59

CV整体的感觉不错啊。不过LZ可以考虑把一些internship的职责合并一下，另外加上achievement。PS:那个情人节巧克力好有爱啊！

-- by 会员 dreamingkiddie (2012/10/20 17:46:12)

请问加上一个achievement写什么呢？把Honors拿下来写吗？

香樟立夏 · 发表于 2012-10-20 18:31:33

自己顶，真心希望收到大家的建议啊！

dreamingkiddie · 发表于 2012-10-20 18:37:12

你买东西是职责，design sales strategy是职责，achievement比如你卖东西给公司创造多少业绩，reduce了多少卖东西的时间，跟last quarter相比，你的strategy吸引了多少成更多的顾客，peers里面rank多少，etc。。。只是一个建议，你可以尝试写写看

芒果15号 · 发表于 2012-10-20 19:15:09

前来学习~~~~
Enterprise Resource Planning Associate, Programming Associate
association是不是好一点？。。。
LZ的背景好棒~申神马专业呢？~~

香樟立夏 · 发表于 2012-10-20 19:36:55

前来学习~~~~
Enterprise Resource Planning Associate, Programming Associate
association是不是好一点？。。。
LZ的背景好棒~申神马专业呢？~~

-- by 会员芒果15号 (2012/10/20 19:15:09)

申的是MIS，本专业

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