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[作文互改] issue 2。。。求围观,求拍

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发表于 2012-6-7 16:25:55 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
Iconcede with the assertion that major city indisputably performs a fixture ofeconomy, values, and development of a society. Its traits of efficiency,technology, and beauty of landmark are the seminal impression on foreignvisitors. However, rural region is also a considerable share in regard tocharacteristics of a society, which embrace its exclusive traditions, hoaryculture, and well-being of villagers.
Majorcity appreciably is the part-and-parcel of the economy and industrialization.The plethora of social needs and strong technology supporting stimulate thegrowth of economy and enthrall vast workforce. Although have created the myriadof jobs, with the advent of population booming, brutal competing is graduallybecome the main rhythm and a label of major city. For the sake of surviving,high quality and passionate attitude toward job must be rooted in a company, aswell as greater working efficiency. These characteristics unassailably mirror arapid development of a society.
Moreover,major city also impress people with its unique and spectacular landmarks. Throughthe design style of buildings in city, one can recognize the distinct valuesamong many metropolises. Values are an essential feature of a society. The mostidea-provoking illustration involves World Trade Center Towers (WTCT) in NewYork and Tower of London in London. Although no longer exist now, WTCT, as aManhattan landmark, is one of U.S.’s previous proudest boasts. Through itsheight of 417 meters, we can conjure up that this is a society advocatingefficiency. While in London, with a modicum of high buildings, the beauty of contouris the most inspiring when a host of squats shined at sunset with the sky asthe background. Obviously, London is suffused with aesthetic corners and artisticmilieu. These are typical labels of London, having no analog comparing with NewYork. Consequently, through major city, we indeed can acquire someconsequential characteristics of a society.
Howeverin rural regions, it also can manifest a society’s tradition, culture, andespecially the well-being extent. Admittedly, countryside poses little priorityon the economy territory and building style culture. Yet, its hoary culture,for example the rituals, is a seminal aspect of a society. Traditional andhistoric vestiges are crucial to the dimension of history of a society. For thereason that low industrialization in rural area, these precious “culturetreasure” are preserved perfectly. Cultural features are also central to asociety.
Forthe same taken, countryside should take precedence over major city when takingaccount to life level of humans. If the definition of most characteristicinvolves well-being of people in a society, people living in rural areas areentrenched in their hometown, content with what they have, and inclined to peacefuland pastoral life. With respect to Better Life Index (BLI), records stemmingfrom China Daily, 2011 conclude that people in city gain the index of 48.7%while in rural areas is 55.6%. Well-being manifests little relevant witheconomy, with wages, with the areas you reside in, and hence therein lies thereason.
Insum, the most characteristic of a society, in essence, is the combination andgeneralization of economy, technology, culture, history, politics, well-beingand so forth. This definition knows no region, no period bounds, because soleone event or period will pass into oblivion over the course of a societyhistory.
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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2012-6-7 16:27:12 | 只看该作者
处女作,各位看官尽情拍吧,我守着呢~~
板凳
发表于 2012-6-8 12:27:51 | 只看该作者
Its traits of efficiency,technology, and beauty of landmark are the seminal impression on foreignvisitors.

这句话的主谓宾分别是什么?
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2012-6-8 23:20:42 | 只看该作者
这句话确实欠妥,本来想用三个单词排比的,不了弄巧成拙。。。
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