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发表于 2012-4-8 21:13:36 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
第三篇issue,求拍。还是写超时了老问题,表达上总是拿不准,会查google,有什么好办法求赐教

6. A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.



Should the students are forced by the nation to take the same national curriculum until they go to the college, as the speaker suggest? In a sense, I tend to agree that students gain the same knowledge is a good thing for their education. However, the speaker begs questions by overlooking the crucial role of anticipated problem and unfairly gave them a second priority. In my point of view, both students’ interest and financial and material capabilities of universities are critical for this suggestion out into effect, and an all-side consideration is needed when deciding the precedence.



Admittedly, bring same national curriculum into force is benefit for both students and universities. For students, the same national curriculum would help students to contrast basic knowledge system, such as math, history, and culture of their nations. No matter whether they decide to go to university in the further, fundamental culture literacy would not be a block for their jobs, communications and lives; In university side, it is convenient for admission departments to estimate whether applications have enough qualification to enter universities. A score of a paper, even it can not tell evaluators the student’s comprehensive quality, but at least, it can show the fundamental knowledge of mastery level of the student which would be a element to assess whether the student have ability to achieve the university education, indeed, accepting higher education. For nation, the same curriculum will be a policy to increase the instructed level and decrease the rate of analphabetic.



The result of suggestion seems to be ideal, however, after further thinking, it will bring more opposed voices. First of all, not all universities have enough financial resources and human resources to offer the same national curriculum. Every nation have at least one even more regions which cannot achieve average financial level of the whole nation lacing person qualified to teach, facilities advanced to help. In addition, come countries, like China, which have 56 nations and every nation has their own culture, language. Blinding to force every student to take the same national curriculum would lead to some minorities losing their language and culture, accordingly, arousing contradiction between nations which go against the stable development of country. It is not only going country to the original wishes, but also go against the country’s peace.



Formulation and promotion the same rational curriculum will improve the quality of the population to same extent. Meanwhile, we have to respect each culture of nation, offering enough development space in order to inherit the ancestors’ wisdom. There is a solution as follows. In the basic subject, such as math, chemistry, it would not cause problem result from the same rational curriculum; in the culture subject, such linguistics, history, the government ought to differ from nation to nation.



To sum up, we can see the advantages of requiring every student to take national curriculum, nevertheless, we also can foresee the problem of this suggestion. The first and foremost goal for nation is to balance the favorable and unfavorable in order to avoid the conflict, but also make students benefit from it.





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沙发
发表于 2012-4-8 22:29:43 | 只看该作者
超时的问题,只能在你能顺利表达出来的基础上来提高,所以先解决表达的问题吧。
民族用people最好,尤其指一个国家内的民族,nation更侧重于民族国家这种民族,比如中华民族、俄罗斯民族什么的。第三段,需要充实,这段可以将视觉放高到一个比较深的认识上,其他的还不错
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2012-4-9 08:03:53 | 只看该作者
真心觉得语言表达很难提高
把people,nation好好记一下
第三段,怎么把视角放到比较高的位置上,求解惑
地板
发表于 2012-4-9 09:52:26 | 只看该作者
真心觉得语言表达很难提高
把people,nation好好记一下
第三段,怎么把视角放到比较高的位置上,求解惑
-- by 会员 东大的千叶 (2012/4/9 8:03:53)

关于表达,最基本的是你能准确的知道一个单词什么意思,怎么用,一个短语怎么用是正确的,语法不要有错误的,这是很基本的不影响读者阅读和理解的前提,而这是你可以做到的,通过句子翻译练习等等,办法总是有的。
第三段一般是进行一个折中或者是提出一种更好的建议之类的
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