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Certainly no reason in my decision is more significant than the airplane ‘s fast speed. It can save us much time. For instance, if you take a trip from Beijing to Sichuan, you can take one hour and half by airplane, but if you by train, you will spent two days. Another example is that if you take a plane from Shanghai to Nanjing, it will take you two hours. By contrast, you will take one day to arrive the terminal So in this case, take a airplane can save you a plenty of time.

Another reason can be seen by every person is that take airplane is more convenient than by train. Nowadays, because people getting wealthier than before, so they prefer to take a airplane. Airplane is giving popularity. In some cases, people can go out and back at the same day. People can by airplane, it will spend one hour to arrive the place where they want to go, and you can come back immediately. Like one of my companies, he went to Sichuan at nine o’clock in the morning by plane, and he went back to our company at nine o’clock in the evening. However, if you take a train to Sichuan , you will spend two day, and when you come back, you will spend two days. So you can see the huge difference between these two transportations.

In conclusion, I believe that taking plane has more merits than by train, even through taking train has many advantages. You can see much beautiful nature, and it cost less money than by plane. But I buttress that by airplane is better than by train.