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本人水平不行，学术渣一个，英语水平一样渣，憋了好久的ps，希望大家多多给意见。个人感觉好像没什么激情，而且很多点好像论证的不够有说服力。但是就这样已经接近800字了。不知道哪些地方应该删减一下呢？
As a passionateyoung man who always has curiosity to explore everything new in the world, Ihave found myself a greater interest in financial engineering studies than theothers. The modern world keeps its development based on the global financialnetworks, and most aspects of our daily life actually are affected by thefluctuations of the financial system as well. I desire to know what trigger isbehind these changes and to learn how to make people be benefited from modernfinancing activities. Being the best financial products designer and takingadvantage of financial tools to provide people a better life are my dream. Andthe financial engineering program offered by your department is considered asthe first step to make my dream become the truth.
I have got asolid knowledge foundation in mathematics, economics and also computer skills,which are all benefited from my undergraduate university, Shandong University,a top 20 university in China, as well as my leadership and team-workingexperiences, which are gained from the social activities I participated in thelast three years. Enthusiastic, cooperative and hardworking, I believe I amfully qualified all the requirements to complete my graduate study in yourdepartment successfully and obtain the Master Degree in financial engineering.
Even though Optics was my major in my fresh year, I found that myinterest was still in the financial field. Fortunately, as a student who rankedin the top 10% percent of all the college students, I got an opportunity tochange my major, without an examination, to financial engineering because it isfinancial engineering that particularly captured my interest and because I ameager to know more about variable kinds of financial products.
Due to this change, I had to take twice courses more than otherstudents. However, not only my core curriculums such as econometrics,microeconomics and financial engineering still were ranked in the top 10percent of class, but also I learned a lot of computer technologies such as C++and some application software like STATA and applied these all in my researchwork during my second and third year studies. For the further study in thisinteresting field, I am learning more mathematic knowledge including Time Series Analysis andIntermediate Econometrics.
Applying knowledge into real practice, one of the most crucialabilities people should build up, is my biggest advantage. I never stop tryingto do my best to apply all the knowledge I’ve gained from my physics andfinance study to the real life. When I got the veryfirst assignment from my professor to do some researcheson financial regulation, I found that this was the life I was chasing. I completelyconcentrated on what I was doing, reading papers written by famous financialeconomists, digging out what wasthekey to solve the problem, using mathematical tools to support myresearch, programming on the computer to verify the model I designed, and,finally, doinga wonderful presentation to share my views with myclassmates and professor. I really enjoyed the whole process of research andthe happiness from getting achievements and new knowledge. And as theresult of my hard-working, my paper was commented by my professor as themost impressive work.
In order todeepen my understanding of financial engineering and to try to apply my knowledgein real world,Iinterned at AgriculturalBank of China(Shandong Branch) and China Railway International Trading Co. Ltd., which also convinced meto pursue a higher education in this field.
As one of the world’sleading departments in financial engineering, your program intensivelyattracts me for its focus on applying mathematic tools andengineering technologies to the finance field. Your researchfocuses and your welcome of students with diverse cultures and backgrounds arethe most important factors for my choice. In addition, The United States, as the mostsophisticated, the most open and the most dynamic financial market of theworld, is definitely the best option for any people who wants to besuccessful in financial field.
In short term, my goal is toachieve some academic success in risk management or analysis approach. I thinkthat more quantitative techniques and computer models should be used inanalyzing economic data or designing financial product so that some crises orfluctuations of finance could be avoided.
My goal, justas your objective goes, is to apply my “Mathematics and Physics backgrounds in the application ofmathematical and engineering tools to finance”. I am eagerto study and do research in this field in your department. With your updatedcurricula and interdisciplinary areas of knowledge, I hope to develop my potential to become a competentprofessional,makingcontributions to the development of financialengineering and achieve success in my career in the long run. |
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