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还有5天考试,现在才开始准备AWA....唯有努力看狗,希望考中吧.....叹.......
第一篇,本月最高频,第九篇 【买股票不如买房子】 Now is the perfect time to buy a house inour city. Over the past five years, average home prices in our regionhave nearly doubled. But average stock prices inthe national stock market have actuallydeclined over the same period. Sohomeowners have seen an increase in value for theirhousing investment during the last five years that far exceeds what they could have made by investing in the stockmarket. Our city’s residents can surely achieve a similar profit over the next five years.Furthermore, if residents invest in a home, they can enjoy the use of the home while its value increase, whereasmoney invested in stocks would not contribute to their quality of life in thesame way that owning a home would. Therefore, all the residents of our city should invest theirmoney in a home.
1. average prices 不能说明每个个体的变化:可能个别房子价格下降/股票价格上升,因此不一定每个居民买房子都会赚,也不一定买股票就会亏。所以买房子的投资收入不一定会比投资股票的回报高。 2. 时地全等,这个比较简单了,过去5年的情况不能说明现在市场依然强劲,更加不能说明5年之后居民还能这么赚(这段可以结合让步) 3. 充分必要错误: 充分→买房子不一定会有better quality of life:房子的维修费用或者为了让房子能够更好地卖出去,房主可能需要花费更多金钱和精力来maintain the quality of the house;此外房产税也可能让房东的生活水准下降;买股票也可以由好的生活,将资产交给经纪打理,赚钱又省力。 必要→生活质量改善也不一定是因为买了房子,可能有他因。
这一篇很有feel,写了将近600字~~打字速度又有突破啦!各位牛牛帮忙看看有没有离题啊!!
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