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182. Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is hard to say whether human first keep animals as stocks or as pets, in fact keeping pets have a long history. It's obvious that keeping pets is good for people, or why they are not banned like cigaretts? Though some people argue that it is not good to keep pets, for they think animal do not worth people to love, or by contrast people cannot love animal in the right way. I think keeping pets is good for people, in the following essay I will explain you the reason.
Keeping pets help relieving pressure. Animals are lovely, some of them even know how to please people, and this is the reason why people love pets and keep them. First, the loveliness of pets helps people to forget the unhappy things. For example, as the birds sing, the sound they make is amazing, and they have different tunes, and it make people feel comfortable. Second, some pets can do something to please people, not always that they intended to do it. For instance, the dogs bear people when they see food, and the cats templates people to play with them when get bored.
Another reason is that pets do not tell lies, yet do they refuse people, they do not have complicated thought to make people suffer whereas it often happens within people. It's a way to escape from the complexed society for those who suffered from it. Have you ever felt happy when you threw out a bone, and a dog run exitedly to get it back for you? To explain the feeling you get, it is because that you find the dog is so honest, much more than people are!
Some people argue that the keeper of the pets paied so much love to their pets, that they paid less attention to other people. However, sometimes those people have no one else to love around them, or somtimes, for those hurted by the betrayal of people, only the honesty of the pets can help them regain the belief and faith of life and other people.
Word Count: 348
我练习独立作文已经一个月,只是看一些网友写的经验和课程视频来学习。
感觉自己的提高主要是作文结构和时间安排方面的。但我的作文结构上还是存在一些问题(比如上次别人提出我的topic sentence不明显,句子头重脚轻) - 不知道自己改过来了没有。
一些句子自己不确定是否合适，比如倒数第二段"To explain the feeling you get, it is because that you find the dog is.."这一句，这样用是否正确。
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