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发表于 2010-8-2 12:48:52 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
Some people like to study alone, but the others prefer to study with groups. Which one do you prefer?





Studying with groups and studying alone both have some advantages and disadvantages. Studying with groups centralize the best features of each person in the group but it needs time to make a good team. Studying alone leaves us more spaces to be yourself. From my point of view , I prefer to study with groups.

The most important reason for my choice is that group study centralizes the advantages of each person in the group. Every one in the group contribute what he or she knows best to the group and the weakness of each person is covered by the style of the group. In this way, the group demonstrates the strongest power of study.

Another reason for the choice of group study is that I can get help from the other group members. Confusions always exist when we study. Yet the confusion of one person may be understood by another person. We can help each other whenever we come up with a question. The power of group study lies in the nature of helping each other.

Finally, I believe studying with groups is more efficient than studying alone. When you are studying on your own and come up with a problem, it takes time to find a solution. However, if you are in a group , the problem can be discussed within the group. It is easier to come up with an answer.

In conclusion, my preference for group study lies in the reasons I mentioned above. The purpose of study is to abtain knowledge and skills than may be useful in our future life and work. When a better way of study is avalible , why not choose it ?
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沙发
发表于 2010-8-3 07:34:56 | 只看该作者
我觉得第一段内容不够充分,观点模糊,这是我写的 请参考一下

Beyond doubt that studying alone does exert the positive influence on people in terms of initiative; people, absolutely, are able to concentrate themselves fully on studying in stead of bothering by a group of people. However, that the obvious default of inefficient of study and lack of information are commonly accept; people are not invariably studying alone to work the problems out. Therefore, I strongly recommend that working with group is the best way to do on account of centralizing opinions, getting helps, and enhancing efficiency.
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2010-8-3 21:23:38 | 只看该作者
感谢~   这几天我多练习几篇
地板
发表于 2010-8-3 22:11:25 | 只看该作者
加油吧
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