急！菜鸟跪求各位帮改DIY简历

小女子连中文简历都没写过，大家看了我的简历别笑啊，可能弱智问题一大推，就请各位CDer耐心提一下，我一定谨遵教诲！在此先谢过了！！

XING MING

                                            Address             

                                                                               E-mail

                                                 EDUCATION

The Finance
                    School, ***** University of Finance and Economics    2005.9—2009.7  ***, China

Bachelor of art , major in finance, minor in accounting       

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                 Overall GPA: 3.4 ;       Specialty GPA: 3.7      

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                 GMAT: 700, Apr. 2008      TOEFL: 89

·    Coursework: International Finance,Corporate Finance, Securities investment, Finance mathematics

·    Awards and honors: 2^nd
                 prize  on  “University students' innovative undertaking“Competition

                                            3^rd
                 prize  on   Speech Competition of Finance School

                                            3^rd
                 prize  on   “*****” Debating Competition

                                                               EXPERIENCE

Debate team of Finance School                                           2008.2—2008.4    ******, China

Team leader

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             couched the new debater, winning  3^rd prize on “***” Debating Competition  

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             trained 4 debaters, half of my team, to be the “Best debater” reviewed by the judging panel

***** Fund Company                                                          2007.7—2007.9   Beijing, China      

  Sales Executive                                    

· helped the 11 commissioned banks I was responsible for to market our

Contractual Open-end funds, getting 1^st prize on sales as these banks sold most fund, about 900,000 RMB, compared with other 10 commissioned bank groups

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            represented the Fund Managers to introduce and explain their investment philosophy to the  potential investors directly, 46 potential investors expressed strong interest in our funds     after my recommendation

· fed back the demand from investors and suggestions from the commissioned banks to  our company, increasing the reputation of *** Fund Company

Bank of  *******                                                              2007.1—2007.2   Beijing, China

 Intern in credit department and OTO (VIP serves)

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            called on the potential clients with department manager to learn the practical business     

Procedures; called on the clients independently twice

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            received clients with client managers, learning communication skills and summarizing 8 principles of  

skill

ADDITIONAL INFORMATION

Interests

  Basketball        Drawing
            (2^nd prize on National Junior Painter Competition)      

Languages

 Native Speaker of Chinese,  Fluent in English and German (learning German over 300 class hours)

奥，我申MSF的~

各位大侠...给点意见吧！这篇resume真的无药可救了么？...拜托了...

无比心虚中...

中央财经的吧

T低了点， 建议重考  其他条件蛮好的，不用心虚  300学时就能FLUENT GERMAN ，相当厉害

简历本身没什么问题， 关键是写ESSAY 吧

嘿嘿~见笑了，T确实低，但是我实在是笨，两次都是八十多，心中留下了极大阴影... 短期内还处于极度自卑中...

大学前两年没学英语（除平时课上那些），光学德语了，所以不止300 学时，不过也说不上特别流利...啊！那万一美国人认真非让我跟德国人对话我要卡壳了是不是就翘翘了？！！

o(∩_∩)o...

这是可能的一种模式:

Personal Data
Education Background(包括GPA和Rank)
Requested tests(G/T)
Work Experience
Honor and Awards
Extracurricular activities
Hobbies

类似于填表,每一个条目下面把硬件列出来就可以了,不需要详述,那些问题在PS和面试中会涉及到.仅供参考.

啊...好全...

我是仿照Wharton商学院的模板写的...刚才比照MM的模式查了下，好像主要内容都差不多cover住了

MM的意思是说按你说的列表从新分类会更好一点么？谢谢MM~

        “更好”不敢当。这只是知道的一个实例，而且是用它WUSTL和Roche免了申请费的，至少证明是可行的“之一”，而不意味着对其他简历表达方式的否定。从逻辑上想，这种填表式的比较简明一点，便于招生人员初审时一目了然。