The Gross Domestic Product(GOP),which measures the dollar value of finished goods and services produced by an economy during a given period, serves as the chief indicator of the (5) economic well-being of the United States.(概念介绍) The GOP assumes that the economic significance of goods and services lies solely(个人认为虽然没有严格表明作者态度,但有暗示是负态度) in their price, and that these goods and services add to the national well-being, not because of any intrinsic value they may (l0) possess, but simply because they were produced and bought.(前提条件,不可以作为缺点) Additionally(表面和上一句话是递进关系,依然不可以作为缺点而提炼出来), only those goods and services involved in monetary transactions are included in the GOP. Thus, (得出作者的第一个评价,即缺点1)the GOP ignores the economic utility of such things as a clean (l5) environment and cohesive families and communities. It is therefore not merely coincidental, since national policies in capitalist and non capitalist countries alike are dependent on indicators such as the GOP, that(缺点2) both the environment and the social (20) structure have been eroded in recent decades. Not only(小总结缺点2,于此基础上提出缺点3) does the GOP mask this erosion, it can actually (缺点3)portray it as an economic gain: an oil spill off a coastal region "adds to the GOP because it generates commercial activity. (举例略读) In short, the nation's (25) central measure of economic well-being works like a calculating machine that adds but cannot subtract. (总结缺点3,在这里犯了习惯性思维错误,总觉得最后的一定就是总结全文的。) -- by 会员 ainiAnnie (2012/3/12 8:38:26)
早上好哈~ 你说“个人认为虽然没有严格表明作者态度,但有暗示是负态度)”你的暗示是指solely吗?还是什么? 还有,就是最后的in short,我没有太明白你的意思,为什么这里会有缺点3呢?缺点3差在了哪里? |