请教一道 GWD SC 题，哪位NN会呢？

bisujiangkai · 发表于 2009-11-1 14:29:14

Unlike mainstream American businesses, more than half of which fail, the failure rate for businesses in the Amish community hovers around 5 percent.

A. Unlike mainstream American businesses, more than half of which fail

B. Unlike mainstream American businesses, in which the failure rate is more than half

C. Unlike mainstream American businesses, where more than half of them fail

D. While the rate of mainstream American businesses failing is more than half

E. While more than half of mainstream American businesses fail

请问，这道题为什么不选D 而选E 呢？

bluedolphinw · 发表于 2009-11-1 14:32:10

failing用的不对？

顺天府府尹 · 发表于 2009-11-1 14:32:53

E明显比D简洁，D主干是 the rate is more than half，不顺

wordance · 发表于 2009-11-1 14:33:31

D is just plain awkward.
No native speaker will express it that way

yaoting33 · 发表于 2009-11-1 14:37:54

D 对吗？ABC不能与后面的对应，UNLIKE 后面接的不是rate，D 与后面的平行

calvinyoung · 发表于 2009-11-1 14:42:19

while和wherea一样不要求两边对称

bisujiangkai · 发表于 2009-11-1 14:59:05

对，选E,大家不要被D选项的前后对应性迷惑了。E is the best of all the five.

dylan_cd · 发表于 2009-11-1 16:21:44

D偷换概念了

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