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1. People attend college or university for many different reasons (for  example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Currently, almost every student has the opportunity to go to universities. if  some adult hunt for job without the diploma of university, it is really hard to realize one's dream, because nearly no jobs will be offer to you.
as far as I am concerned, to attend universities is a necessary process for a student, especially Chinese students.
 
The foremost reason for attending universities is a multitude of companies or authorities require high quality graduates serving for them. so if we have not attend universities, we are disqualified for the employee's require. thus we can not live on ourselves own. but why the leaders or bosses provide such a harsh prerequisite on us? the answer is more and more people own the diploma of university, that give rise to depreciation of the undergraduates. employees could find the right person with a higher level diploma easily. why must choose someone who are even not attend universities? Furthermore, they consider high educational background as high aptitude, so it is not surprised about their choices.
 
Another reason is that attending universities could provide us a good opportunity to obtain more knowledge which will affect a big influence on our future. my grandfather ever told me, the more you learn, the better you will be. it is not hard to realize this phenomenon, some people work lifelong time, but still have a low status or salary. what is the reason for this? in my view, they are luck of necessary knowledge to go further. someone are aching for promotion, but they are in vain. no one will offer you good job unless you can act as a important role in their companies and meet their need.
 
In addition, a subtle explanation is that through studying in university, we can acquaint many friends who are our most precious wealth in  lives. Communicating with them, we can broaden our horizons and get rid of stress from study and work. furthermore, when we are sullen sometimes, we could pour out to them and receive their console. thus it helps us solve the psychological problems on time.
 
To sum up, people choose to go to the university for a good future, a competitive advantages and making friends. attending universities is really a unforgettable experience and a precious wealth.