也是第一篇作文，“工作的意义”，麻烦大家帮我看看，灰常灰常灰常感谢:)

写这第一篇文章用的是“10天搞定”里给的提纲，就这样，找例句，用词霸，挤了快四小时才挤出来，汗。。。我恨作文！但是坚持才能进步，希望得到大家的帮助：）我们一起努力啊~~~~~

“ppl work because they need money to live.what r some other reasons that ppl work?"

skeleton:

1,achieve sense of accomplishment

2,win recognition from others

3,contribute to the society

4,natural of human beings

    work,which took at least 1/4 time of one's life,is indispensable adj.必不可少的, 必需的n.不可缺少之物) in our lives,ppl need to work because they need money to live,apart from that,there r other significant reasons for working

    firstly,work is a way to achieve sense pf accomplishment.  it feels good after conquering a sticky issue棘手的问题，to give an example of my own,i was always lacking confidence before i resolved the problem i met on work by myself. i spent a whole week to complete it,forgot food and sleep,but in the end,it all worth it. i never felt so strong and self-confident before

    secondly,ppl work  to win recognition from others.   in general,those ppl who work enthusiastically would be more positive and energetic in life,they bring a better life to their family,their community,even to the whole world. so they tend to gain more goodwill of the public,in other words,they win more recognition from others

    thirdly,ppl work to contribute to society.  as social beings,the quality of our lives depends in large measure on what we contribute to the society. how can we measure or define one's social status?some ppl hold that it should be based on the wealth an individual owns while others argue that one's social status should be awarded by the contribution he or she made to the society. i agree with the latter.so the harder we work,the more output we made to the society.

    the last but not the least,it is one of the natural desires of human beings to work,ancient ppl divided their jobs into hunting food,breeding children etc,nowadays,the division of labour is more and more detailed,thats how ppl combine with the society to make a better life for all human beings

    from the foregoing discussion,we can come to the conclusion that working is not just a way to gain money to live,it has more significance such as achieve sense of accomplishment;win recognition from other;,contribute to the society;follow the natural desire of human being,so on and so forth. we work not only for ourselves but also for the whole society,thats how we make our lives better and better.

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