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之前写了五六篇，刚开始花一个下午去写，现在还是得2个小时。感觉自己的速度啊，离考试还是有一段举、距离啊，怎么办呀..... 110、some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Outline: Thesis: I prefer to stay with friends 2---could absorb more information i.e. --- enjoy more happiness -1—staying alone gives a quiet environment to make people think independently Make more space among friends According to a recent statistic on the internet, a number of people who prefer to spend most of their time with friends occupies 75 percents of all people in the survey, and undoubtedly has the tendency of increasing. Some people claim that spending most of their time alone gives a chance to own much space among friends and much time to think independently. This idea is strongly opposed by numerous people who maintain that spending most of their time with friends makes them gain more information and enjoy more happiness. As far as I concerned, I appreciate the latter. No one can deny that spending most of their time with friends helps them obtain more varieties of information such as career presentation, colorful life, and widely studying. Our friends who live in the different circles have varieties viewpoints towards the society and the world which sometimes give us a new definition of the world. Some of the significant ideas will influence us even help us to understand the world deeply and walk out of the dilemma. For example, I am a student majoring in finance degree and I always prefer to spend most time with my friends from other faculties even other colleges. When we stay a whole day in a café, we often talk about our own points about the professional studying, international events, and our feelings about the world. From my friends, I obtain a amount of information that I never known and study in the class. The more time you stay with your friends, the more information you will attain. In addition, spending most time with friends also brings more happiness, which helps you get rid of sadness and lead you to a bright way. I am not a optimistic person and I always think over too much things, as a result, I often feel unhappy and desperate to the world. However, I am so lucky that I have lots of friends and I love to spend more time with my friends. Whenever I feel sad and unhappy even desperate, I always absorb energy from my friends and that help me forget the unhappy things. With the help, I become more and more outgoing now and live a happy life. The more communication with friends, the more happiness you will get. However, there may be some minor disadvantages of spending most time with friends include both lack of time and space to think independently. If we spend more time with our friends, at the same time, we will loss more time to think independently and even loss this capability. Another drawback of spending most time with friends involves the trouble of quarreling because they have less space to do their own business and become fickle. Although I agree that there may be a couple of disadvantages of spending most time with friends, I feel that the advantages are more obvious. In the complicated society, people need more information by communicating with others. Spending most time with friends is a convenient way to achieve them. What’s more, spending more time with friends brings more happiness to our lives. In my opinion, spending most time with your friends and giving proper space and time to your friends is the best way to make you succeed and happy. 2hours 548words 虽说打的WORDS越多越好，可是到底打多少字是最理想的啊？ 哎，急啊。
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