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论坛题库里似乎没有人写TWE167.昨晚第一次练手,希望T友们能尽情地进行批判!

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发表于 2008-3-15 18:37:00 | 只看该作者

论坛题库里似乎没有人写TWE167.昨晚第一次练手,希望T友们能尽情地进行批判!

昨晚第一次试写IBT作文,原本不好意思拿上来,发现论坛题库里似乎没有人写TWE167.希望高手们能尽情地进行批判!

千万不要留面子

Your school has enough money to purchase either computers for students or books for the library. Which should your school choose to buy--computers or books? Use specific reasons and examples to support your recommendation.     TWE167

With the improvement of my school's economical condition, it faces the truth that how to use the money on its right way. Most people claim to add some books for the library, but other people consider purchasing computers for the students differently. As far as I am concerned, I agree that developing the faculty of school to afford computers to the students. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

History abounds with the experiences that technology is the first thing in productivity, and computer is one of the most useful high-technology items in resent years. We should use the computer as the most powerful weapon to fight in the battle of study. So with this kind of aggressive tool, study can be much more easily. We may quote a common example of my friend Lucy. Lucy is a simple Chinese girl but with a strong desire to go to the USA, So she begin to study English. Though she paid great efforts on it, the good time didn't last long. She was in difficulty in her language speaking skill. One thing may trace this problem was that she didn't have a truly environment of talking with native English speaker. Luckily, computer simulates a stage of direct conversation between the user and PC robot. After one month training, Lucy now can talk with foreigners confidently.

In spite of helping students with their study, computers can tremendously enlarge their knowledge. When you meet something in you textbook you don't understand, what will you do then? If you say check the answer in the library , I will just tell you that’s what we did 20 years ago and we use the computer to find the result at present ; When you expect to get some information , are you still reading the newspaper from page to page ? We just need type several letters on the keyboard to link the internet. Because of the vast information that internet contained, students will be beneficial widely from computers. Whatever they learn from the school or they see from home or they pick up from the society, it can never be disturbed themselves if they use the computer.

Library can also bring students a lot of advantages, such as searching the data to finish the paper. However, when they are carefully compared with computer’s profits, we can see that computers are much more fit to the students. If my school use the money in establishing high-technology faculty ----computer, we can draw a fantastic picture which children’s study will be easier and full of fun.

第三段写的时候没想到好的例子,不知道这样子写符不符合ETS老头们的要求。


[此贴子已经被作者于2008-3-15 22:59:48编辑过]
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-3-15 22:59:00 | 只看该作者

自己顶一下 今晚刚出炉的TWE142

A gift (such as a camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a child’s development. What gift would you give to help a child develop? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.

TWE142

With the improvement of people's life condition, parents now pay more attention to children's development. Then, offering an appropriate gift to their kids to de a significant consideration today. Story books, at first thought, may seem to an attractive idea, but in close analysis, I find computer will to be more right for children. Refer to the reasons that computers can not only help children with their study, but also make them learn skills in relaxing.

 

History abounds with the experiences that technology is the first thing in productivity, and the computer is one of the most useful high-technology items at resent years. Parents can make use of computers as a role of teacher in kids life. Teachers are those who teach students knowledge and answer the questions asked by their students. By the function of "put in" and "put out", computers can easily do the same things for children. A vivid example just has been occurred in my neighbor's family. The young parents have only one boy who is now 10 years old. The little boy is very smart, and he always get the first prize in the school tests. He regards all the prizes to his favorite present --- a computer. He once said: "Thanks to the great gift offered by my parents, I can use it to study English easily, and also it helps me check the complex math problem."

 

In spite of helping children with their study, computers can be a unabandon part in their leisure time and help them master more skills. Resent investigation conducted at a university shows that children usually relax themselves by surfing the internet, playing TV games, and chatting online. All these activities relate to computers. By surfing the internet, kids can easily find the things they are eager to know; by playing games online with other children, kids can understand what teamwork is; by the online chatting, kids learn how to get along with friends.  Undoubtedly, computers are beneficial to children's development in their entertainment.

 

Books can also benefit to children's development, such as teaching them how to act their role well or be a good boy. However, when they are carefully compared with computer's profits, we can see that computers are much more fit to the kids. If parents give a computer as a gift to their kid for the kid's development, they will be pleasured by their wise decision even during the sleep at night.

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