第一次尝试写的作文，009那篇，跪求修改意见！

看李笑来的作文总觉得和自己的想法不对路，所以DIY了，结果发现用的都是简单词汇和初级句子，而且字数也很纠结怎么也写不长，郁闷ing～各位大人有空的话帮忙看看吧！拜谢！

以后争取一周写一篇练笔～

Nowadays, people consider the living conference is more and more important. Compared with the preference between living in a small town and in a big city, everyone holds his own opinion. From my perspective, I hope to live in a small town nearby a big city.

On the one hand, living in a small town, I can enjoy a much comfortable life style. Most small towns have a beautiful environment without polluted. My family and I can breath fresh and clean air everyday. Because the price of house in a small town is far less expensive than in big city, I can control more spaces to put up stuff, and my children will have enough spaces to play and grow up more healthily. In addition, I extremely expect the warm and harmonious relationship among residents in small town.

On the other hand, I cannot just live in a small town without some necessary pursues, such as a good job and a high level of life. At first, there are more job opportunities readily available in big cities and the pay is much higher as well. Moreover, children are able to receive an education with a higher quality in a big city compared with the educational level in a small town. As many parents who love their children deeply and put children’s education in the first place in China, I hope my children can receive the best education and go to the famous school in big city. At last, big city always supply variety goods, such as fashionable clothes, current cosmetics, and dedicate food. How can I enjoy a modern life without those luxurious but lovely stuff?

Of course, it can be argued that this kind of life style exists some unavoidable problems. I must buy a car and pay a lot for the gas. Actually, although maybe I have to get up early in the morning and drive across the long trip between the big city and the small town, still, I persist my opinion that living in a small town nearby a big city is the best choice for people.

062. What do you appreciate most in a friend?

开头部分用的lxl，因为觉得很经典。。。

I appreciate all these three qualities in my friends. It is important to me that my friends are intelligent, because they can always understand what I said very soon and intellectually stimulating our conversation on meaningful topics. On the other hand, a friend with a good sense of humor is normally the one who has positive mind. S/he can entertain and know how to ease my sorrows by making me laugh loudly. However, only the reliable friends, by virtue of their dependability and loyalty, are guaranteed to stand by me in difficult time, and thus, from my perspective, reliability is the most important characteristic I look for in a best friend.

I have a good friend with whom I had been familiar since childhood. She is not a very intelligent student in our class; in fact, sometimes I had to help her catch up whit others. Meanwhile, she is lacking a sense of humor. It seems that most of her jokes are very cold or common property. However, these weak points cannot let her lose friends, contrarily, she always gets along with others harmoniously and has a lot of good friends, including me as well. I believe that she is welcomed by reason of her honesty. For instance, even though she thinks that she did something wrong that I maybe wouldn't like, she still tell me the truth and not lie about it. As a result, I can believe her as myself. We are able to rely on each other and share our secrets. During those long evenings when the life seemed unbearable and despairing, we cheered each other up and trying best to give a helping hand. Actually, she is my most cherished friend and I hope our friendship can be permanent.

In conclusion, I have a lot of friends: someone are intelligent, someone have a sense of humor. Of course, I like those two kinds of superior qualities in my friends. But, in order to have a long lasting friendship, the most important characteristics I want urgently in a friend is someone who is reliable.