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作文题目：3月4日机经：Nowadays, the ability to cooperate is more important than past? A or DA

As society advances, people should gain more skills to be competent in the rapid development of society. Some critics hold that the ability to cooperate is more important now than in the past. The articles and data over the recent years lead me to believe that people should associate with each other to get further achievements. Therefore, I strongly support the above statement for the following reasons.

First, cooperation encourages association, and then association promotes development. One's knowledge scale is narrow. Admittedly, one can enrich broader knowledge by reading various books, participating in huge number of tasks to get sufficient experience. However, these methods would occupying from large amount of precious time, which can be used to do some more meaningful things. If in a group, people can cooperate with each other on a large task, negotiate with each other, give advices and suggestions which would make sense to others, and then everyone work for a certain part of task. Therefore, the efficiency of work would increase, even soar under special circumstances.

Furthermore, on no account can one ignore the importance of the social relationship between citizens, especially co-works—and cooperation could strengthen work relationships. If work together, two workers would familiar with each other and there would be a variety of topics readily available to talk about. The atmosphere in the company or other conditions would never be stress and uncomfortable. Co-works would build strong relationships and therefore, let every worker be happy and enjoyable to work sophisticated tasks, which everyone reluctant to handle before.

Encouraging efficiency and relationships are two major impacts of the ability to cooperate with other peoples. From what have been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that cooperation is an essential ability to current students and applicants.