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啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊 明天考了 处女作求拍 德克的猪显灵呀

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楼主
发表于 2007-10-27 09:14:00 | 只看该作者

啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊 明天考了 处女作求拍 德克的猪显灵呀

啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊 明天考了  大家都帮帮我呀 使劲批 先谢谢大家了!!!

Being successful is invariably desirous to all human being and sometimes people want to succeed desperately. However, the definition of success is varied from individual to individual. Some people hold the opinion that only wealthy people are successful, whereas others contradict it. From my perspective, people could achieve success in a variety of ways.

First and foremost, it could be based on a person's reputation to define whether s/he is successful, not by how much money he earns. If many people can recognize him/her, or lots of people care for him/her, then s/he is successful. For instance Mr Mao is the first president in my country. He led the red army to conquer the invaders and eventually built up the republic of china. He exhausted his energy and power for defeating the invaders. All chinese respect him and care for him. However, his daily living is so simple that you can even find many patches on his clothes. Can we point out that he is a unsuccessful person with the reverence of every single person in my country?

The second reason is that people succeed as long as they fulfil their goals. people might have various aims according to their distinct background and personality. They try their best to eliminate the obstacles on their way to success, and finally succeed. For example, Lee is a celebrated track and field athlete in my country. Born and bred in a athletic family, he established a goal to win a gold medal in Olympic games when he was nine years old. Besides the normal studies in a athletic school, he took the intensive practices four more hours a day at home. During the process, he missed all his cheerful childhood and adolescence that a person should deserve , but filled his life with tedious practices. At the Olumpic game in 1980, he achieved his goal and won his first gold medal. the gold medal did not provide him plenty of money, but he is still a successful person.

Last but not least, a multitude of people lived under the illusion that all rish people are successful. The business is just a small part of their living. Their company might have advantages over other firms and made a great deal of profits in the trade. Nevertheless their family might have a problem. The businessmen always have to travel around the country to contribute to their firm and spend little time staying at home and accompanying with their family. It is not a pleased family in case of only a parent and children watch Television every night. Being out for long times, the relationship between the businessman and family is distant. This is indeed true in reality. According to the recent American research, divorces in families due to the out-of-town job and distant relationship outweigh the sum of other divorces. Therefore, wealth is not equivalent to success.

Taking into account what i presented above, people who succeed are not just based on how much capital they possess.


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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2007-10-27 11:28:00 | 只看该作者

怎么没人帮忙亚 !

自己顶 !

大家帮忙呀!

板凳
发表于 2007-10-27 11:57:00 | 只看该作者
真挺好的,读起来像托福阅读了,加油
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2007-10-27 12:37:00 | 只看该作者

谢谢楼上

不过我上次作文才17分 肯定不行

大家 帮帮找错呀

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-10-27 13:31:00 | 只看该作者

德克的猪 帮我改改吧

谢谢了

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发表于 2007-10-27 15:34:00 | 只看该作者
显灵~~~~~~~~~~~~这个词好像是用在~~~~~~~~~~
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-10-27 23:32:00 | 只看该作者

德克 德克

招呼德克

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发表于 2007-10-28 00:00:00 | 只看该作者
找德克啊。。为什么不发去写作区呢。。。
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-10-28 00:03:00 | 只看该作者
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