【4.12托福】独立写作求批改啦~【求大神批阅】每周一篇独立可好？

Michelle-LXY · 发表于 2014-2-17 23:30:14

TOPIC:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Television has destroyed communication among friends and family.
Use specific reason and examples to support your opinion.
求大家狠狠批阅

Michelle-LXY · 发表于 2014-2-17 23:31:54

Nowadays, so many high-tech are inrich our life, many family and people also have computer, television, tabelet and many more. In fact, I believed many people can not leave those products. Television is so crucial and popular in our life, for example, at 7 o’clock, when we turn on the television, we can watch CCTV NEWS, from this program, we can know so many news about our country or other country. When we want to relax our moods, we also can watch some entertainment programs. Overall, you can watch anything what you want. But when I chatting with my friends or family members, I know so many people really do not like watch television, the reason is they think so many television programs are waste their time and will destroyed their friendship and family so that they like to do other things rather than watching TV. But in my opinion, I think television will not destroyed communication among friends and family. Now I will give you some reason to support my statement.
The most important is, I think television is so popular in our life, virtually every family have it. When I watch a program, maybe my friends are watch this program too, we will have same topic when we are chatting and it will make our conversation more interesting. For instance, every friday I will watch CHINA’S GOT TALENT with my family and after this program we also can talk about the context about this program, it make my life more colorful.
Secondly, when I after study, I will feel so tired and do not want to do anything include sleeping, now I just need to turn on the TV and change to some programs which are so funny. Maybe about few time, I will feel relax and happy, when my moods are become happy, it is very good for my healthy.
Finally, some channels will announce some programs about education or some new ways of study for students. Those programs also can improve our study and after you watch those programs, you can communited with your friends or classmates and they will share their experient or some different ways what they know for you. I think this is a good way to study well in our life.
That all reasons I show you to support my opinion.

【4.12托福】独立写作求批改啦~【求大神批阅】每周一篇独立可好？

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