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奉上一篇作文求拍!话题是关于Internet的,请多加指点,谢谢了!

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发表于 2007-9-5 19:38:00 | 只看该作者

奉上一篇作文求拍!话题是关于Internet的,请多加指点,谢谢了!

题目:
84. Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.


正文:
Internet is one of the greatest inventions in the last century, which let the information reach every corner of the world in a second and makes the earth smaller. Is there any problem created by such a technology? Of cause there is. But in my point of view, these problems certainly do not impact the benefits and conveniences Internet bring us. Internet improves our lives in a number of aspects.

First, in education. With Internet technology, we have an access to the world's advanced theories and information in the area we study, without worrying about if the information we have got is out of date. A Chinese student can get the information he wanted from an American website just through a computer with a connection to Internet, without any steps out of his room. At the same time, long-distance education is well developed based on Internet. For example, quite a few students in Australia have their classes on Internet sitting in their home on the pasture.

Another aspect that Internet contributes a lot is business. Before internet was widely used, telephone and traditional mail were the only ways to communicate with each other for people in different places. There are some obviously disadvantages of these ways. Telephone can spread the instant message, but the cost is quite considerable especially on international communications. And the traditional mail is too slow for business work - A decision may be received after several days - this is certainly not an efficient way. The invention of internet changed this situation. E-mail is now the most common way for people to communicate. And other Internet technology, such as online-meeting, makes it effective to work in the modern society.

However, someone doubts that the more and more false information on the internet may cause problems. In my opinion, this is not at all a serious problem. Who can guarantee that the information on the papers is all true? I believe that majority of people know how to distinct and evaluate the information. People often believe the things they like to believe, whether they are on the Internet or not.

Anyway, the value of Internet far outweighs the disadvantages it brings to us.

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结构、论点、语法方面都给点好的建议吧,我觉得我的语法实在是只有初中水平……估计还含有不少标准的CHINGLISH,请高手们狠拍!
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