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我IBT独立写作到现在还冲不上300字啊

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楼主
发表于 2007-9-17 19:06:00 | 只看该作者

我IBT独立写作到现在还冲不上300字啊

速度既无法保障,质量就更不用提了。

不知道我这种没考过G的人究竟应该怎么练IBT作文呢?

9。29就要考了...

沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2007-9-17 19:09:00 | 只看该作者

看了一下版上关于写作的文章。发现不少人推荐用模板。究竟独立写作模板应该怎么准备呢?

另外,我自己用TWE185里的题目认真写了十几篇,后又仔细修改过,字数基本都在300-400左右(当然,写的时候没有限时...),另外又列了大概几十个大纲。不知道这些东西应该怎么利用呢?

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2007-9-17 19:10:00 | 只看该作者

帖一篇我自己的作文吧,这一篇在那十几篇里感觉中等偏下。

63. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.  50 min 

In most cases, it's true that difficult experience will really benefit our future life. There are many instances exemplify that difficult experience in one's childhood became a wealth for his whole life at last. A typical example is Beethoven. Unfortunately he had a bad father and was forced to practise piano at midnight. Also, he was sad to find that he had begun to lose his hearing when he was still young. But all of these misfortunes gave him a strong character and a huge amount of inspirations in music, which lead to a series of brilliant compositions, including nine famous symphonies and an opera.

 

Sometimes voluntarily challenging troubles and being eager to get over them may be more useful for a successful life. For every people, experiences which are hard and necessary and important are more valuable than are those which are just fun and easy and can give immediate enjoyment. For example, Kobe Bryant, one of the greatest basketball players in NBA, has kept a habit of completing 1000 times shot every day for many years, even after he had been successful in Los Angeles Lakers.

But it should be pointed out that not all difficult experiences will have a positive influence on our future life. If not being dealt with in a correct way, troubles and problems might cause some negative changes in our characters. Because of misfortunes in their early life, some ones were not eager to trust others, held a dim expectation for the future, and were not good at communication with people around them. In these cases, difficult experiences always made people become gloomy, unhappy, and so unfortunate that they might hate other people and even the whole human society and be eager to kill innocent people and destroy this world in revenge, like Hitler. 

Word Count: 301


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地板
发表于 2007-9-17 21:57:00 | 只看该作者

每天练习,严格计时,从易到难.

即使不能保证每天,一个星期也至少3篇.

模板要制订出自已的一套,是可以以不变应万变的那种.

我就是很好的个例啊,从以前撑死也写不完到这次考到Good(4.0-5.0).

所以说扎实勤练才能得到好的回报呢.

可以参看我以前发的求助帖,CD上的前辈们都是很好的人呐~ ^____^

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=19&ID=269680

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=19&ID=269126

5#
发表于 2007-9-18 04:12:00 | 只看该作者

摸班:把作文改成CLOZE,用摸班写150字,再自己凑 200字,结构PERFECT,应该是个GOOD了。CD上有很多XDJM发了很多很好的摸班。找个去练习练习就好了。

关键是坚持写

6#
发表于 2007-9-18 09:41:00 | 只看该作者

practice typing maybe???

include timing of course...

7#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-9-18 15:41:00 | 只看该作者

谢谢大家。

但模板似乎给人一种作文注了水的感觉。

在自己写作能力没有真正提高之前,要么作文注水,要么就字数不够。这二者哪一个较好呢?

8#
发表于 2007-9-18 17:51:00 | 只看该作者

……………………注水?还猪肉呢……哈哈哈……

嗯,的确跟写作素养有很大关系,如果临时抱佛脚的话……注一点水吧~怎么也比就300字放在那儿好看啊~不过不要狂注!!!自己要表达的太少都是模版“废话”也不行啊~~~

9#
发表于 2007-9-19 18:06:00 | 只看该作者

写作毕竟是思维训练,语言只是表达思维的工具。当你在思维方面收发自如的时候,寻求语言上的表达就成了自然而然的事了。

10#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-9-19 18:25:00 | 只看该作者

但语言可以成为瓶颈啊....

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