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发表于 2007-8-20 14:19:00 | 只看该作者

德克的猪评一下吧

具体说    请您改一下作文 
TOEFL iBT Writing 
Independent writing 
82  can advertisment tell you a lot about the country ?

It is well-known that advertisment serves a majoy role  in today's business world , ranging from the daily food to the most adavenced scientific devices , the fashion outfit to the attrcting travel destination . They are unbiquitous , inexcapable and inevitable . To some extent , I support the idea that advertisment can tell you something about the country .
In the first place , with the internet and the TV set , you really can get a  lot information about the country including the local costums , the traditional value ,and the most important of all , the people.  From the advertisment , you also can form a roughly conception of the country . For example , from the trouist advertisment , you can understand the geograpical situation of the country , knowing its beautiful spots and historical attrctions . With the help of the fashion advertisment , you can grasp the newest trend among the young generaion of this country , what they  advocate and what they dispise.
In the second place , sometimes advertisment , especially the kind only aiming at gaining profits , will mislead you to a wrong direction of this country .  Take the recently cosmetic surgenry  as a case in point . In this advertisment , It always asserts that this procedure will make you more glamorous, more attective and also claims that there are many people already compeleted the surgenry and lots of people are anxiously waiting .  As a matter of fact , the majority of the people in this country show no intrest in this , and most even ignore that advertisment .Therefore , if you trust this kind of advertisment  , you are probably get deluded .
In a nutshell , the advertisment can both help and impede  you to understand the general condition of the country which you like to know ......
time  : 25 minutes
沙发
发表于 2007-8-20 14:46:00 | 只看该作者

你可以先参考该版置顶的帖子里边的修改集合

然后我在iBT区有一个写作的帖子,你也可以参考一下

然后发现自己的一些问题,进行修改过后再发上来

我进行具体的修改

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2007-8-20 17:57:00 | 只看该作者
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