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Spend your earned money immediately or save it for the future?

If we have experienced the first salary, we will know that young people usually spend almost all of the earned money before they receive the salary of the next month. When we grow maturely, we become wise enough to save part of our money and learn to handle with the money we have. It is obvious that working people should save their earned money because future needs are based upon not only our intelligence and skills, but also the saved money.

Saving money presents a healthy and vigilant attitude towards the adult world. The pressure from buying family house, fostering offsprings, risks of diseases and possibility of losing job are all reasons to save as much money as we can. In China, young people are responsible for attending their old parents who have supplied all their expense since primary schools to college. If he/she is a considerate and compassionate person, he/she should not get money from parents since they can earn money and support himself/herself. For a splendid wedding, the first-30%-pay for the new appartment, expense of possible advanced studies, youny people should save as much money as they can to release the heavy loads on their parents, though parents are basically their best supporters when they have troubles. Saving money is  not only to built safety for oneself but also to set our parents’ heart at rest.

Saving money is a first step for a young person to learn how to handle with their money and increase their saved money using wise investment, for instance, buying insuarance, stocks and national debts and so forth. With more money, people could plan their future better or insure their health and jobs and so forth more. If a young people does not have the first bucket of gold, he/she would never become rich in the future. He/she might be an utter labor at work for the whole life. Learning to invest and manage the earned money is of great importance in the modern world. Though young people have not known in college, it is time to consider about that since they could make money, yet saving the earned money is the prerequisit.

Enjoying life is necessary if we can make money ourselves. But there should be reservation of the money as early as we can. Truly we donot want to be pathetic persons who are scarcely capable of enjoying the delight of spending the earned money, nevertheless, we should not risk our life with the possibility that we donot have enough money to help ourselves when bad luck comes to us.