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Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better?

It is impossible for anyone to live with our parent within our whole life. So it brings a question, when is the best time for us to live along. For different people, the answer can be varying. Some people may think that the longer we live together with our parent, the more advantages for us. However, I would like to say, as a young adult, we should try to live independently as early as we can. Here I give some of reasons for not being dependent with our family.

Living independent could give us much more freedom and space than living with our parents. Nobody will bother us when we watching TV until midnight; no one will yield at us when we did something wrong. Meanwhile, don’t even expect anyone will cook for us as well. However that’s also could be a good thing for us.

Young people will know nothing until experiences what the real life is and what the difficult is. No pain no gain is the best way to describe this situation. Everything will under our control. By then, we are the real decision maker, we can make decision for ourselves without asking our parents. Then we know we have to take all the conditions into our consideration, otherwise we may make mistakes. Or maybe we made some mistakes, which are also help us grow up.

Since we born, we’ve been living under the “big wings” for approximately twenty years. The fact is being a child forever is impossible. Flying out, we will learn how to live alone, how to handle things in our actual life and how to deal with others. Soon or later, we have to step out of the “big wings” and left our parents. Living independently earlier is definitely a wise choice that will help us learn more and experience the real life in person.

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