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请大家帮我改下，第一篇作文
就是6.16刚考的题，写了大概20分钟，句子和单词都用得太简单，还有十多天要考了，还是第一篇作文：（
With the highly development of the mass media, people have an easy access to TV, movies, etc. So children are inevitable to contact with them. Many people argue that TV and movie will greatly influence the behavior of children. I have to admit that TV and movie have somewhat impact on the children, but it still under the control of the parents.
It is normal that we always see a group of children in the cinema or gathering together in front of the TV set. Even today, this phenomenon is more and more prevailing. Almost every family has a TV set and children have more money to spend as their will. Moreover, it seems that parents are more busy about their work in the expense of the care about their children. So the children may have more time spent in contacting with the TV set or movie rather than communicating with their parents. As a result, they cannot be avoid to be influenced by the TV or movie.
However, it is still under the parents' control. In the begining, the parents should enable the children to tell good from bad, so the kids will not suffer from some inappropriate programs, for instance, the violate play or the adult movie. But this is not enough. Since the children are vulnerable to the influence of their pals, their parents should make strict rules on the type of the programs which the kids can watch. Even some parents, as I know, they totally move the TV set out of their children's lives. In their opinion, the TV will do harm rather than good to their kids. Probably someone will argue that there are some healthy program on the TV which will benefit the children. However, this kind of benefit can be offset by other resources, like books or the music.
From the above analysis, we can easily come to the conclusion that TV and movie cannot impact the children so much that the parents cannot control. The parents can choose the program for their kids even totally restrict them to watch TV.
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