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Agree or disagree
Nowadays, ___背景陈述_________When people ask themselves the question” ____________”the answer depends on a lot of factors such as how their experience are. People who object to A argue that it is not a wise choice to____________They believe that…But those who advocate it, on the other hand, argue that____________From my point of view, there may be one or two disadvantages to A; however, I deem that there are far more advantages.
First of all, perhaps one disadvantage to____________is that______________.For instance, __________________. Another drawback to _____________involves the possibility that____________. For example, ____________.
But why I __还是选择这个观点呢________?The answer to this problem involves many factors. The main reason for my propensity for __________is that _________. For exmaple_____________. If I __不选择这个观点________, how can I ever__________ ? How can I ever __________ ?
Another reason for my inclination for _____________ is that _________________. For example, _________________.When human beings …, isn’t it necessary that …?
Of course, choosing A also has disadvantages to some extent,_______________此处论述A1-2缺点___________ Although there are a couple of disadvantages to A , the benefits are more obvious. On one hand, _____________ On the other hand, _____________ From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that_____________.
Prefer Nowadays,__背景陈述___________.When it comes to…the majority of people claim that it is a brilliant choice to .They believe that.. But people who advocate…on the contrary, argue that…In my opinion, I deem that the advantage of A outweigh any benefit we gain from B.
I do not deny that xxx has its own merits.
Considerable though the advantages that A enjoys are, they can not compete with the benefits that B brings out when C is taken into consideration.1.Basic to any understanding of _____主题_________is ____第一优点__________
Matching the benefits of _______第一优点_______ is _____第二优点_________ Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages to …______________此处论述B的1-2优点___________ I feel that the effect of comparison is heightened by the particular advantage B enjoys. On one hand, …On the other hand ,… From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that… 这个是我的模板,请各位高手帮我看看,我水平不高,不知道这样写行不行.还有没有需要改进的地方呢? 我读OG的时候,发现今天ETS给的范文写作手法都很新颖,而且很稀饭修辞疑问句,所以在文中的正面论述部分我加上了一些问句,考试的时候尽量用上. 这个模板里有2句话我不敢确定 1.Basic to any understanding of _____主题_________is ____第一优点__________
2.Matching the benefits of _______第一优点_______ is _____第二优点_________ 比如说聪明朋友和幽默朋友谁更好那篇,我可不可以这么写 Basic to any understanding of the benefits people gain from intelligent friends are their useful suggestions. Matching the benefits of obtaining usefully suggestions is that people become more intelligent themselves when hanging with brilliant friends.
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