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小弟第一次发文章,请赐教!谢谢! TWE006
6. If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what
would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your
answer.
If I could change important things in my
hometown, I could select many choices, such as environment, traffic,
education and etc. But if I need to could one most important thing, I
would rather select environment because of follow reasons:
First,
good environment could make people much healthier. Environment has a
considerable relation with people’s health and life. Good environment
could bring more health; bad environment could bring more disaster.
Specially, some terrible environment problem, such as water pollution
and air pollution, could even kill people. And even other environment,
such as fewer trees, could make people uncomfortable. Moreover, if
people are healthy, it could influent their kids. Good environment
could bring a healthy baby rather than bad environment.
Second,
good environment could make people much happier. People who have a
better health could be able to do more things, whether doing more
exercise or doing more work, that people could be healthier and have a
better salary. In that case, some problem could be solved. Family
problem, for example, is always, as well known, because of economic
problem. If the people could be wealthier, the problem could be solved
easier. And it still could make people happier.
Third, good
environment could even make people more productive. If a person is
neither happy nor healthy, he could not do anything. In contrast, a
person who is both happy and healthy could have more motive to do his
jobs, more creative to make a fantastic idea and more intelligent to
solve the problem. In addition, if he do it well, it means he have more
opportunity to promote or to study. Then he could be more and more
skillful, and that also mean more productive.
In conclusion, if
I could change only one important thing about your hometown, I would
rather choose environment than other because of it could makes people
happier, healthier and even more productive.
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