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Some educational system emphasize the development of student capacity for reasoning and logical thinking, but student would benefit more from an education that also thought them to explore their own emotions.  

I think I am totally agreed with speaker’s assertion that to educate student not only limited on improve their ability of reasoning and logical thinking, but also to teach them how to explore their emotions. In our society nowadays, more and more people come to understand that those people who is more welcomed usually have a good EQ than IQ. The truth is that to have the ability to understand, comprehend other people is a crucial skill one must have in order to be successful.

So many times we have learned from the media, a student who is extremely intelligent or outperforming others in his/her field had a mental crush that destroyed their future. Beside a great pity overwhelmed me, I hold a strong criticism about our education system, which happens to be not putting enough effort to give physiological strength to students. Therefore, I deem there are three reasons for me to support this idea in the topic.

Firstly, through teaching students how to explore their emotion, students able to learn how to properly control their feeling. Everybody must have been experienced the up and down in their life. There is nothing wrong to be felt happy or said, but one should not indulge in their feeling for too long, and let the feeling get out of control. For example, some course should help student to understand that it is ordinary to feeling under after failed in an exam, but they should use this experience as a catalyst to motivate themselves and put more effort in the future. Make a choice to suicide or give up their school certainly is not the right way to express this emotion. On the other hand, teaching the student to be positive, looking at the bright side, such as improvement made during the preparation process, also played an important role for them to become efficient and persistent in their life.

Secondly, teaching students the right way to explore their emotions also quite salutary. One apt example is that many student want to have a good relationship with opposite sex in high school or university. But there are sometimes miserable things that end up in their relationship with their boyfriend or girlfriend. I think school should teach student how to love another person and at least given them some directions. Such as love a person does not means to manipulating each, but to support each other all the time. And loves someone not necessarily has to be in an intimacy relationship, but to love him/her even can not be together. In short, if school could give some education on student emotions such as how to love others, I am confident that student would be more mature and less tragedy could occur.

Finally, the major reason I agree with the topic that is to teach student to explore their emotion would make them more humane. At present, we have seen too many man and woman with well train skill in their job, but without compassion, without understanding and love toward anything or anybody unrelated to their own benefit. I think our society need citizens to be responsible, and have strong affections. We don’t need a highly educated person who is frigid and cynical. Therefore, I think assist student to fully express their emotions toward different events would ensure them to establish the right value system.  

In conclusion, the education on exploring emotions is as important as teaching skill and knowledge for students. We should ignore the benefit of showing them right way to feel toward variety of things and people. By doing so, we are certain that we do not only improve their intelligent but is also building the fine character for them.

我只了第一段覺得寫得很好耶!

看了這區的寫作程度明先優於TWE區的。因為自己才準備開始拼GRE，不敢班門弄斧